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B.R.E. Presentz : For The Soldierz...........
IP: 4577 CD9A
...............this is to all da soldierz and trooperz whoz life is kurupted by bad shit....dont give up....heres my story
...born in to poverty, me and my mama, backz against da wind she had her second child at 23, and i became da fatha of him i hated this world, why did this have to fuckin happen to me i wouldnt let go of da anger inside...i jus couldnt let it be then came the devilz from hell....terror is what they brought evil came in, took over my lifeless life, and this is what i thought... .......... Fuck em all.....but this aint my world no more shit, watched my future fall and crash.....broken on da floor like my life was holdin da handle.....and my fate closed da door bury my self in sorrow....fillin empty cups wit empty drinks if i where a type of animal.....then my life is drivin me extinct my battle tactiucs had failed....now i had to stop drop and think lik a sno ball the as i got bigga pain kept growin and growin lik i had a big ass hole in my body, but fuckin no one was sowin tried 2 turn my life around, but i was just such a fuckin fool it was one thing after anotha, lik i was swimin in an empty pool then bitches kept playin me, afta a while i jus couldnt fall in love turned 2 a lif of crime, pac influenced, mamas lil boy was a thug cockin gun afta gun loadin clip afta clip, hated this shit, sick of it then i jus had dropped the weaponz, i knew that i had to admit open the church doorz ,and i went to the alter , and jus prayed let god and jesus into my heart,......then the evil as dismayed to all the trooperz, if u take godz handz, u can climb da boulderz this is advice from a warrior.....a story........for da soldierz......... ............much love yall |
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IP: FF98 53B8
Deep drop man,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,I was feelin it.........Emotional shit right here........................Flow was onpoint...........Content was Ill
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IP: FEEA 701F
tight, tight, tight...... content was real, only thing i would say was flow was lackin slightly, but fuck dat i liked it fosure, deep shit respect..... uppin for da playa
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IP: FF98 53B8
Uppin for my boy
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IP: 4577 CD9A
Deep shit fam. UPPIN FOR MY NIGGA
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IP: 0B5C E56C
This wasn't bad man. Your flow was decent. Had some nice lines here and there, and others were aight. I can tell this was from the heart. If this was your real life 'n shit, I'm sorry man. If not, you wrote it well. Imagery wasn't bad at all either.
Great Piece. Be on the look out for another one coming up tonight! pZ! |
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IP: FF98 53B8
Still uppin for my Family
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Geaux Fuck Yourself
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IP: 5790 E5AD
Some real good shit right there... I be feelin' it..... Real tight shit man
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IP: FDD6 AE15
i liked it ... keep droppin
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IP: CEF5 716F
........thx yall....i appreciate da feedback.....and weezy.....yea datz my life........it may suck dick.....but i gotz sumthin 2 write about.......still uppin yall.....
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IP: CEF5 716F
.....quit sleepin yall.........
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IP: F262 6C8F
i was really feelin this shit this was a nice post you kept this real and kept it flowin this was some hottness
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shut the fuck up even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun dead in middle of little of little italy little did we know that we riddle some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun |
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IP: CEF5 716F
^^^^ thx.....still uppin......
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IP: CEF5 716F
.....c'mon yall....fuckin sleep 2 much..........
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IP: A086 F184
I see u're looking at this...Well I'm a up it for u....U Inactive mutha fucka...Just playing...............But why you're so inactive???
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