this is my verse to a song...its not finished yet cause i'm not sure i wanna do it. its pretty much about me usin rappin as a way out of stress and shit like that...anyway, tell me what you think


see i, struggled with hard shit
and scuffled with hardships
but through out that my character remains untarnished
i'm flawless, but nowhere close to bein perfect
see you might be uncertain from the words i've exerted
but my slurs are inverted, contridiction at its finest
see i'm worn down from the friction of mankind and
depicted by the blindness, unsure of what lies ahead
my eyes is red, late night i lie in my bed
on and off ponderin thoughts of the cost
on what it would take to unravels lifes knots
alongside with other miscellanious subjects
i leave myself subject to other peoples judgements
open to the public, hopin that they love it

thats all i got so far...tell me what you think