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05-27-03, 12:41 AM | #1 | ||||||
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The Struggle
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Written By Sand and Eviley
SAND: Awoke underwater wishing the breath of life eyes closed darkness is finding light whats it like? day to day constant fight life is knocking vicious of happiness outta site EVILEY: Drowning in this pool i despise A sacrifice of love that i kept percise undecise, i dream of what could have been Life is what god gave me and I created sin deep inside i hated him lossed a belated grin stuck in this person i'm not complacent with life erasin it these thoughts are my doom so i awoke from the dream in a blank room and.... I saw illusion without any conclusion visions of reality never appeared to see so i live in this dream unbelieveable to thee crying the words i want to be free I live here lonely bored ab asylum of souls lifes courts have found me guilty i hate the lies and because of my current position i am paralized it's scary sites so hateful They don't believe i'm an angel hateful to my wings that i carry with me they don't even look they can't even see me believe i am not crazy in this world i am stuck in they don't understand so god Fuck them mental eruption stuck where i don't even belong an angel not freak this world is wrong i rotate this unharmonious earth without a sound or song but an inner self is content knowing it won't be long] I glance out of these caged up windows and i see beams of you in the clouds i pray to get out and see with astound cause bound it be you who i havent found So I pray for years an escape to bear a fallen angel your silence proves you don't cave views of heaven are blocked by the skies hexagon and now i have an obsession only with my death I cry in my dreams while i am sleeping i weep when i am awake standing i've gone crazy my mind is not stated i sit in a corner cause my soul is faded my life has been invaded Non- complacent the day came like any other and spent itself into the machine of eternal shreds and it was death that earned my feelings respect when they save me from heavens ratters hung with the halo around my neck my blood spattered, scattered where i thought was hell speaking these words on the news like a person's fate spell an angel is dead or was already i can't tell but you can't murder what you already kill so i stay at peace with myself even though i don't like it here i am fatigued and my knuckles hurt i'm eternally fighting fears so take this as a lesson whatever it is and switch things around give death a kiss I am free from this insanity called life god called me in the back of my mind it's ready my angel now it's your time you are forgivin for your insanities crimes |
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05-27-03, 12:50 AM | #2 | ||||||
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Re: The Struggle
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^^^^ WOW both of you came nice, great imagery, you guys flowed off each other nice, i could almos hear you guys LOL nice topic nice everything.....................
make sure you guys reply to my open mics when i post them! STOP THE SLEEPING! LOL |
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05-27-03, 01:42 AM | #3 | |||||||
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Nice flow I like tha color change to.
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05-27-03, 02:58 AM | #4 | ||||||
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this is good, yall did good on this
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05-27-03, 11:33 AM | #5 | |||
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wow..those last 2 replies
were freaking excellent... and flu..i reply like a mother to all kinds of peeps..lol
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05-27-03, 04:51 PM | #6 | ||||||
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awesome replies thanx FLU,R-Sinic and DarkHistory........
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05-27-03, 04:55 PM | #7 | ||||||
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prety fly shit you guys did feed off each others rhymes, some tight shit here, gj!
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05-27-03, 05:01 PM | #8 | ||||||
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thank you grim.....
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05-27-03, 05:02 PM | #9 | |||
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this was a really great piece...I've always been partial to stuff with angel references.
I could almost envision what you were saying, and the constant alternating of parts was a refreshing change from how most collabs are done. This really one of the best drops I've seen on RB since I joined. Keep this stuff up both of you, especially you Eviley, I havn't read very much of your stuff and I'd like to see more. best lines: "it's scary sites so hateful, they don't believe I'm an angel" "I've gone crazy my mind is not stated, I sit in the corner cause my soul is faded" Peace
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05-27-03, 05:19 PM | #10 | |||
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Nice shit fam.............keep spittin...............UPPIN
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05-27-03, 05:22 PM | #11 | ||||||
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everyone plz go vote on dire_1 vs toongf or something like that Dire is new and hot shit all ready 2-0 looking to keep the streak alive holla @ him
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05-27-03, 05:41 PM | #12 | ||||||
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thank you alota understatement....and witherman thankz fam......i hope that you are able to view some of my writing more on here understatement....
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05-27-03, 05:45 PM | #13 | |||
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thanks for the feedback...
homies...
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05-27-03, 07:53 PM | #14 | |||||||
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Illest piece I've read today................Both u 2 came out Ill as fuck..........U cats Fed off each others Lyrics..........Nice collab..........Eviley keep representing Family
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05-27-03, 07:55 PM | #15 | |||
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fo' sho'
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