Death is knockin' at your door, stand and Face-It/
Dont turn your back on me kid, your punishment is here....and i demand you Embrace-It/
If you wanna cop out now, your plan is Taste-less/
If you spit to your boy, and he says your hott.....i gotta tell you somethin...... that man was Wasted/
I'm only tellin tha truth.....can you Take-It?/
My verbalz can cause so much impact, they can Dismantle-Faka'z/
My mouth can dissaprove, turnaways, void and Cancel-Hata'z/
Hopefully, you have tha power to Channel-Anger/
What, my body is gonna be missin soon, Damn-You-Gangsta(lol)/
Irritation is one thing, but i cant Stand-a-Pranksta/
Call me "Pope Innocent III" cause i have enough clout to Ban-a-Nation/
One of my "hooks", only caught your belly, that was a Planned-Abrasion/
Dont "try" to step any fartha, cause this Land-is-Sacred/
Only true emcees Can-Make-It/
My brain is my weaponry, my mouth is artillery..............i dont use my Hand-to-Spray-Clips/
Oh shiznit...............what about tha bodies, i left Crammed-in-tha-Basement/
Is reality a myth, is tha ransom a fake, kid..............guess not, you need a getaway car, a Van-to-Escape-It/
Lyfe is unstable, tha obituaries should read "that Man-was-Brainless"/

Peace

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"I'm stuck with...what i'm Stuck Wit, cause i don't Suck Dick" - Jadakiss

My verbalz can cause so much impact, they can Dismantle-Faka'z/
My mouth can dissaprove, turnaways, void and Cancel-Hata'z/
Hopefully, you have tha power to Channel-Anger/......that bit was alrite


yo try n spit about a topic and try not to rap GANGSTA

the voacb was a bit weak in some places.............try n spit about a topic and try n drop only 1 thread per day

double rhymin is just how i spit, it is a hell of alot harda than spittin single rhyme schemes lyke almost every kat at this site, i enjoy tha criticism and thank ya for tha input, its nice to see that kats at this site have improved their skills and finally stopped sleepin, stay real, peace

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"I'm stuck with...what i'm Stuck Wit, cause i don't Suck Dick" - Jadakiss

lyft it, peace

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<center> Soft Focus</center>

"I'm stuck with...what i'm Stuck Wit, cause i don't Suck Dick" - Jadakiss