[align=center]bored as f*ck

so i took the luck

and stuck some lines up in here


lol


skitzofrantic mentally insane hibernating brain when i spit start to panic....

rushin red blushin ready to silence your head what u heard is what i said....

rapattic , hip hop aholix spittin heiro-gliphxz u cant understand with einstiens knoledge....

dieseased tumor desceas your non-esisnt rumor ,head collapsin breath gaspin decapatate the consumer....

panosonic recorder,demonic re-order,chronic disorder ironic platonic ionic tonic borders....

ivisible line kurupted rhyme devine disign decline ya spine combine shrinez....

illmatic method charismatic static skit erratic spit....

dark so i lit a spark outcome no remark like a silenced shark.....

ebrace the pace to fade to space speed the chase catch the grace out of sight with out a trace....

got the power to devour the flower coward in less then a hour and still spit sour.....

im demented leave ya dented and segmented with out significantz....

abolish and demolish your decapatated body thats fragmented.....

kill nerds with two thirds of the slured words u heard im 2 absurd....

use my laser vision to inscssion you wit persccion then split u with division....


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Not bad man, I van definitely say your better than some people I've heard before. Keep rapping man and you'll always get better. That's my advice, I figure if you do it long enough you can think of some wicked shit but im out. good luck wit rappin

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it was original, next time you should spend more time on tha story or your topic than placing countless rhymin words togetha, i lyked tha flow thought, peace, 1 luv

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