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Old 05-28-03, 12:33 AM   #1
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" some real shit"

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"A Word To My Love"




picture your life as the stars, eachone fade its your last day on earth,
never again will man be the same,its like death took our souls,
now where juss roaming earth with no feeling of pain, but death makes our
happiness, picture yourself as a knife a sharp blade can slice the world of
its life and hide itsself never to be found, ghost are real bcz deres a life
after death, those who feel love be with bear w/me im going soon so deres no
need to share your last breath and now i end these words of pain let me spit
my game!!!!!...................

yo yo/


only my lover can save me now/

let the waterfalls drops/

ayo/


dis illusional thoughts mesmorized by love and what it created me/

i hold this pen of life stab my thoughts to paper/

life is driving me crazy no meaning to eternal death/

juss stress the chance to live life to da fullest/

niggaz hate to see success thats why i have to put a blade to dere chest/

breathing through a hole in dere heart now my pain i share with da rest/

shorty love me but her man aint feeling my chest/

to see the love is real and your juss an imagination away from her heart/

when i say i love you its real and on to digest in her mind/

shorty sho me the real meaning to life and ill make you my wife/

collusions of thoughts hit the memory lane when cant think/

fucced up memorizes of beats and uncensored fighting/

mama im wise to see your heart and share to the world/

bcz BEAUTIFUL I JUSS WANT YOU TO KNO YOUR MY FAVORITE GIRL/

lets ride on this love rollercoaster and nuttin but enjoyment/

i wrote dis song bcz i need to express to da world/


god only sends you one guardian angel and give only u one life/

why not share it with u and have you for the rest of my life/

these bells are ringing and angels are singing/

plzz be my wife ill hold your heart but u posess the key/

to my after life so deres no need for any strife/

you control my soul of its time on earth/

the holy ghost saves our ever lasting love thats him god above/

now lets make love to the waterfalls and dance to the voice of the heavens/

this is neva my last written juss our baby born a first given/





call him genesis the begining of this ever lasting life/

now juss hold you tight tell you love is forever/

cry upon my shoulder and bear with this unbreakable diamond of a heart/

i love you from the start share the riches of my essencess/

get this final shot please neva break your heart/

im not even human so i kno how u feel dunt doubt and the appeal/

shall come like judgment day horns and horses its beautiful/

light shines upon the earth errybody dies on this day/

so we going to heaven anyway juss gotta pray 4 anotha day/

deep diving soul thank you god above although i sin/

to make my life betta for thy shall see you soon/

judge my blood in my veins for its sins though thy heart didn't /

thats whats real i cry to my lova now sho her the deal/

not even my beloved wife can stop you from kiss upon my lips/

crown you with the jewels neva eva a mans eyes seen /

juss dieing b-4 the age thirty three and come w/ me/

take dis adventure of the world under and ova/

decipher the evil and take care of the living/

i juss love you so ill hurt you to see you live once more/

no mistakes eva is gunna kill you bcz i first shall plop to the floor/

6 feet unda i go dont cry or mourn 4 me i juss want to remember/

died b-4 da age thirty and for our sins/

neva hole again juss have to talk to dis pen/

but i can sing this song to you/
AMEN!!!!



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illusions make you cant see the anger in me/
fire from my side put a hole through ur vest/
niggaz gangsta stop telling me about ur hood/
seen the hood b-4 bloody roar cant even step/
scared of forensics taking me through da door/
forever ryder no need for assitants/
put the toast to your eyes/
sho you the everlasting white light/
death is crazy cant even compete 4 soul/
juss have to wait 4 judgement day/
to arrest your eternal soul/
ni66az out here think its funny/
but a couple of scuds in your chest frame/
den you think im buggin/
i grin bcz i dun give a fucc/
its wateva rides and thats gunna be on u/
young buck bullets fire juss ducc n bust/
now your out of lucc, wat type of aim was dat/
caught 3 to da bacc now u juss laying flat/
crying for medical assitants but errybody say fucc dat/
how your hood turn on u i told ya dun give bigg ups/
to gold diggers and hookers/
mama cry n say shame on u thats funny/
bcz before i killed u i told you to/
look at me now 16 with a death case/
in no mind frame so its a piece of cake/
shake the fed n jakes/
on some americas most wanted shit/
laugh sit bacc n drink a forty/
while they search 4 me aint that the shit/
no time 4 dat gotta load up my clips/
bacc on the blocc hussling shit/
diesel neva heard of/
too many amaeuters put u on da spot/
now do some push ups bitch/
souljas gotta ride hard so its tyme to work out/
guns dont make you gangsta unless u kno how to use it/
grip the movafucca tight and blast at the enemy/
one chance 4 dis shit so make it right/
G nigga no more talkin juss let the shells/
dance on the floor slugs cut through you/
impact feel like 30 car collusions/
your hole frame bent n out of shape/
good die young i guess time told its faith/

killa posess the instinct of the unknown wat u get outta life now/
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Old 05-28-03, 04:15 AM   #2
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needs work, ur layout was whack, didnt help yo flow whitch was lackin, i got a bit bored but i perserverd to the end it was plesent but aint nothin that aint up here all day from all na mean,
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Old 05-28-03, 01:50 PM   #3
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it was ok ..... got kinda bored tho
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Old 05-28-03, 03:46 PM   #4
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i know it be up here lol like i said its SOME real shit not da best shit i eva wrote dogg lol
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Old 05-28-03, 03:58 PM   #5
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yea, the structure was fuckin' stupid, it was waaay too long and your flow, vocab, and wordplay need a ton of work.. stay up..
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Old 05-28-03, 04:14 PM   #6
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Is This A Wannabee Synikal ??? Cause We Already Got On Of You...
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Old 05-28-03, 04:17 PM   #7
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umm... this needs work

keep writing man.........

anyhow peep "Street Prophecies" everyone
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Old 05-28-03, 04:20 PM   #8
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like evryone said, needs work, and it was too long,1
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Old 05-28-03, 04:28 PM   #9
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yall niggaz plzzz!!!!lolol look me up on search and youll see da best shit i eva wrote!!! i aint no fuccin wanna be synikal i was here b-4 dat nigga and he a fuccin bum ass nigga anywayz duccin battles like he hot!!!
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