I know the flow is a bit off for now
Will all be worked out for audio version


The street hands everyone a prophecy, kind of like an inherited trait/
Only the character of one determines how we accept this fate/
No one either admits it or understands it but at one time we've all cried/
In fear of the interpretation of what the streets have prophecized/

Case one of this enigma happens to a cat named C-Bo/
Well known on the block but always hated.. rep comparable to D-Bo's/
No conciense and lacking morals kid was only out to get his/
Quick to do anything to keep up his lifestyle even if it meant corrupting kids/
This is where the streets voiced its opinion "Keep things in perspective... just play you're part"/
Still got too big for his own good continued to force lil kids to get they drug-game start/
This move set up C-Bo for failure cat shoulda listened and kept a low-pro/
Instead one of his little proteges got knocked by the 5-0 and soon they was at C-Bo's door/
Now locked up on 3 felonies... not the life cat had envisioned/
His hindsight now produces clear vision... When the streets talked he shoulda listened/

The street hands everyone a prophecy, kind of like an inherited trait/
Only the character of one determines how we accept this fate/
No one either admits it or understands it but at one time we've all cried/
In fear of the interpretation of what the streets have prophecized/

Second case happens to a legend ... infamous cat known as L. Bohn/
Athletic gifts matched with intelligence in the the hood he held the throne/
Cat came up proper... stable home with a happy mother and father/
The game kept trying to lure him in but kid had to muich to lose so why bother/
Then adulthood hits... all the sudden things just dont come so easy/
Decides to take up the street's offer and started slangin and acting sleezy/
Streets then dropped some words of wisdom... "Dont let your telents go to waste"/
Too bad this warning fell on deaf ears the game had L Bohn from his first taste/
Broke and homeless now... Its becoming clear... Cant you see?/
Failure precedes you when you dont heed a street prophecy/

The street hands everyone a prophecy, kind of like an inherited trait/
Only the character of one determines how we accept this fate/
No one either admits it or understands it but at one time we've all cried/
In fear of the interpretation of what the streets have prophecized/

Watching fam end up in the gutter sparks a revelation in Chrit/
Gotta flip it and not ignore it when the streets drop some prophetic shit/
Ya'll know my past Chrit started thuggin then elevated/
Peeped the hardships of my crew and tried to learn from what they demonstrated/
Knew it was coming... street say "You existence behind bars will lead to fame"/
So Chrits twists that shit and decides to try his hand in the rap game/
Decided bars of words are more desirable than those of steel/
Still not sure of the outcome everyday fear is what I feel/
See fate is unavoidable... Either it leads to success or strife/
One can only wonder how a street prophecy effects one's life/

The street hands everyone a prophecy, kind of like an inherited trait/
Only the character of one determines how we accept this fate/
No one either admits it or understands it but at one time we've all cried/
In fear of the interpretation of what the streets have prophecized/

The street hands everyone a prophecy, kind of like an inherited trait/
Only the character of one determines how we accept this fate/
No one either admits it or understands it but at one time we've all cried/
In fear of the interpretation of what the streets have prophecized/

yo, dawg.. 4-real, this was good.. I got tha flow perfect on it except the hook and a bit in the first verse about c-bo.. his story reminds me of my boy Derr.. just got pinched with traffic. cocaine, and un-lawful storage of ammunition... he's out for tha next 30 months.. this was a deep piece, mad knowlege dropped here.. 1

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yeah man that shit was nice, the flow was actually pretty easy to pick up and u had some hard hitting lyrics man
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That whit was.....fuckin sweet. I got the flow and the lyrics with no prob. Keep droppin shit like this.

hmm....
how quickly things get buried here


^^^
uppin

this was hott yet again, on the real, you are one of the best lyricists here, this shit was off the hook,1

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things have tendancy to ge tburied here by bullshit,is a problem for all the decent shi tlike this to get some exposure........very very nicely written...th ehook was catchy,nicely done,the verses were nicely written.watching fam get sparks a revalation in chrit...<not hte whole sentence but youknow...very nice lines...each verse started and ended well,carried strong,....waiting and waint gofr the audio chrit...

lovin ghte 3rd person type of thing...
makes you sound higher then other cats don it.

anyways well writtne song,good work..


peep my step left verse...
hopefully it ownt be buried.

yo ur shit is hott i spitt some shit like dis b-4 called angel's suicide on here!!! but good looks on my stupid post lol!! keep doing ur thang

this was ill i liked it...keep staying up

thanks for the comments so far

keep em coming

one more uppin

i see i have a writer on my sqad i like writers cause i am one myself dis shit was deep and nice man street appeal and all dat shit i like u are one of my strongest links keep shit like dis up duke holla.........

gosh chrit, i think u drop the best open mics 4rill
keep doing you
-Tory

^^^ thanks for the comments ya'll

uppin for more