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Old 05-28-03, 02:40 PM   #1
Reno Starr
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The Story of Corey <Part 1>

IP: F11D C4BA

This is the story of a man by the named of Corey |
He held a gun in his inventory, wanting to bring glory |
Glory for his crew, but who knew it would cost so much |
He saw the foe, arm around his hoe, hand went down to clutch |
The handle of the gun pulled it out fired of three |
The bullets went past me, one to the knee didn’t have time to flee |
The last two hit the foe in the chest, the one day he didn’t wear his vest |
Corey laughed he was done with that pest, he felt blessed |
Till the day he was un-dressed, the cops came for the arrest |
They didn’t take him easy, he put up a protest |
Planned a getaway for the west as he ran |
The plan was to get out the window, but it was over before it began |
He took less than four steps, before he heard a thud at the door |
He froze and reached for the same gun that started his fun |
He knew what he did couldn’t be un-done |
He dressed up with gun in hand, this was his last stand |
The cops had a single demand |
“ Drop the weapon and put your hands on your head “ |
He knew if he did he was dead in jail, if he didn’t the room would be painted red |
These both ran through his head, as time seemed to freeze. |

The story of Corey freezes here.....
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Old 05-28-03, 02:53 PM   #2
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dope song man... way to tell a story liked the verses
need to complete it!!!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=51173
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Old 05-29-03, 02:01 PM   #3
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Ya thanks man good to know someone at least likes it and I will have the rest in part 2 which is coming underways.
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