it's only the first 2 verses and a hook, still working on it, but holla with some feedback..

wraped in plastic, frantic, on ya last breath, start to panic.//
a manic depressive's life, hard ta grasp it.//
imagine you had it, your only way out's as an addict.//
doin' lines of coke, ecstacy--> and hits of acid.//
try'n ta create a smoke screen in a sense-->
to opress these feelings you have.//
feeling so bad, fault placed on yo-mom and dad.//
friends who werent there, and the family that doesn't care.//
so despared, sit with a blank stare, it ain't fair.//
life ain't fair, all this stryfe ain't fair.//
your pleight drives you to the knife blade there.//
why wait there?...

what is suicide, but a human mind
unstable and un-able to see the true you inside
lucks fabled it's just labled so you don't choose to die
consumes your heind sight, livin' a blind life
I'm right...irate, dry-mind state, try-fate...

hallucinations caused by loosin' patience.//
and a lack of sleep, like "imovane" with no booze to take it.// {imovane's a STRONG sleeping pill}
a slow pain seems to chew your brain stem.//
hate tempts, deep breaths ain't helpin' like drownin',
can't escape them, the voices, in your head pounding.//
louder and louder until you can't count them.//
can't help it, so you help them, 'cause more carnage than helter skelter.//
realize your actions and melt then, you feel like nothing.//
no hope or shelter, broken outer, inside you're explodin'
no control or help-near, you've chosen.. you're goin' without care...

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