trapped in this vaccuum/ tight as a cocoon/
can't get out but i wonder if it will ever end soon/
i wonder if this is penance a purgatori for my wrong doos/
broken hearts and late calls while i chilled up in my room/
misdeception and false hoods that make girls swoon/
like children over cotton candy cause thats what you do/
i'm pulled towards your energy like atoms enroute/
forming molecules to create this world from nothing but fumes/
gases/ a poison that exudes/
grooves of passion groves that make me straight cartoon/
cause now i'm confused/
one minute the thought of you creates a deluge/
of uphoric potent emotions that straight consume/
everything of me till i'm huddled and aloof/
a damn buffoon/
somebody slap me and wake me from this coup/
a war waged by my heart in the blink of an eye i stood/
on the front lines of the congo gettin shot and froze like wood/
my common sense meant nothing/ it was only woulda shoulda could/
i'm a man who ain't supposed to feel anything but his morning wood/
and a shot of ejaculation without no hesitation over your back and eat some food/
but i'm not that dude/ no playa who tries to act crude/
well maybe once or twice but i never would on you/
to me your made of porcelain/ but unlike a doll i can't make you move/
i know this through and through/
my inspiration as an actor i can tell that its my cue/
to leave this in pools/
dredged upon my earth and my insides spooled/
wound tight like rope now i'm hung off the pew/
alone in this world and alone in this view/
that you're the best and worst thing i've come across in this une-/
iverse and this verse is the last one i spue/
till i see you in this big city and till i fall again for you/

I Know The Feeling...But Probably Cant Relate 100 Percent On That One...

Nice Flowoture To It

preciate the up noiz

anybody else, wheres the feedback

Im Most Interested In Reaching 100 Posts Now...LoL

nice piece keep elevatin.peace kidd.

can put in the open mic.....i really liked this one....i read it out loud and the flow and the lines just fit perfectly....u should do more like this..i think this is the first time i saw ur work...hopin to see more

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i liked the lyrics and the flow.i think it would make a nice song,add a chorus and another verse.up'n this for ya
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yeah i know the feeling too but that was just to long nice spit