12 lines max
no crew
no dr
U spit first

*warm up*
nappz ima send you and yo rapz back to tha ice-age, lock ya up in yo experimental lab-cage~1
ima watch you pre-writin' spits full-of-rage hopin ya name be on tha RB front-page~2
this is yo attempt at a claim-to-fame but dawg all ya gettin is put-to-shame~3
Rapbattle is ma game, not fo' tha lame-minded bitch ass flame-blinded~4

*works up*
ima slowly cut you up bitch, slice ya inta a million pieces like a voodoo rag-doll~5
open up ya own stall fo' gays titled 'free for all' look inta yo crystal ball ma spits merkin yo wit cholesterol~6
this battles a combat zone, and ama full-blown killer, crush yo poor ass wit ma wallet leavin you in a cold sweat~7
dont get upset, bad enuf yo bitch all wet, had to sort her problem wit a single player version of russian roulette~8

*merks*
Yo fuckin buggin-me ima slap you so hard yo gotta come home fa' work wit 'thumpin-leave'~9
am crushin-trees so a can see yo on yo knees beggin-please ima take this battle wit fuckin-ease~10
yo spittin so light ya drownin in sorrow not-saliva, ima prize-ya mouth open n blast-ya wit ma nine till yo diein'~11
yo ass be flyin on ego, at end of this battle a burst yo bubble leavin yo cryin beggin fo' no trouble~12

..............................aight dawg spit up..........................
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come on dawg spit up................................................ ................................

Yo yo, Your ass is lame that was a very weak verse,
fuck wit me and I'm a going to make your whip a hearse//

At funeral they're going to want few words from me,
I'll tell them your bitch ass shouldn't of fuck wit me//

You tried to hard that's why your at a risk,
I'll cut you into little square like a floppy disk//

I ain't Iverson but I am the answer
your bitch ass is wack you need to be transfered//

I spit hot lyrics that burn your mind and spirit
Fuck wit me then I'll fuck up your appearance//

I'm to times better than you in every single way
Messing wit me then today will be you d-day//

uppin .................................................. .................................................. ................................

aight uppin for votes yall......................... ill return favour if yo got a battle goin............................................

aight uppin for votes yall......................... ill return favour if yo got a battle goin............................................

Black took this one man, better rhyme scheme and flow, Nappz your shit was way to basic, you need to work on that. Peace

Vote BLACK Stay up mang! haha :-D

Peace again

black got this shit easy. ey return tha favor against my battle with sway aight dog!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!

poll vote- black plague

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yo napz...ur shyt is straight up WACK....black gettin my vote. napz....ur lines was short, and u needed betta metaphors. and black it seems like u been rappin for a minute....but black ur spellin and comparisons is a lil wierd, like the whole u drownin in sorrow not saliva line lost me...u need to work on ur ish a lil 2 .

uppin for votes.................... ill return favour if yo got a battle goin......................................

Black took it...Do the same for me? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=53330