10-30 line max
Drop within the Hour
Usual Rules.......
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1 hour begins now......

aight i wanted this battle to be 10-20 line but o well u put the rules so i guess were bout to write a sory lol aight 10-30 hola

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Lets go guys I wanna see dis' one
In the mean time hit my battle
WhiteKid vs. Consiquence
Aigh't
I'm Out
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yo chek it//....




damn...notha C skurred to front past what dey neva smaked before//
Handsofgod betta take action last 10 lines draggin u a-cross dis floor//
Ryhmes poured like a rainstorm wit no rain, came like a fake rapper, no game//
inept ta handle values at degree's, pressin u str8 inta obliviouse emcee shame//
came to me u like a trinidad..but u messin witta lenox lewis//
nigga come les do dis, reppin elite elements ta da motha fukin truest//
synicly... acts-of-god are known to me as miracles//
tryina do da math cross ya emcee multiplicty wit yo recipricals//
addition dun added up a intense sensation never before felt in ya un-defieted-body//
a loss...seems like u fuked wit everybody....but they handed empty pistols while u busted outta shotty//
frosty, icey, crisp, hard punches flow from dese lyrical fists,.. i inhibit//
flo'in busted used-pre-writtens, pre-veiwed an re-veiwed at da last can-i-bus exhibit//


Slip in.....

slip inta dis like a nigga wit a limp dik surcim-sized fukkin witta fat bitch//
banana peels on way u lines-be-peelin mine....along a code witta R&B battle glitch//
sik witta mic...literally sik witta mic//
spilled chunky vile, undirected like a first-time-cummer for a tike//
sike//.....
ur ryhmes ill like sars be to a chinc finna go joggin//
try hard, god couldnt hand out dis miracle, wish u hadnt hit yes at logg-in//

spewin now....

hyperventaliating from ur verse spittin so hard u almost broke a sweat//
Didnt consider training...seen, 13-an 17, but u forget da name is jet//
to-late u missed ur flight...no take-backs..reciepts not warrant//
bitch nigga 12-0 wished he had a second chance to brign forth wit a worthy opponent//
but as we can c, from u ta me, to da whole R&B, Cj fukin owns it//
Didnt consider consequense like Saddam, so now ur gonna feel the wrath of war//
Fore frontin wit CJ, only leave u spitten wastin lines of hardcore, resultin in injury: Syptome 1 be cole sores//
nother lyrical chore....busted down to a emcee..who thought he had jus-a-lil-bit-more//..
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next//.......

he accepted this battle so i reach back for my punches that hit with "hurendous-blows"//
that hit carsonjet and snap this kid n bend him in half so he can finaly say hes good from "head-ta-toe"//
i seen a vet wanted ta battle,so i accepted cuz they think i can only beat newbies,so wha up "carson-jet"//
ive peeped ur battles ur punches may merley sever bodys, but mine connect n "shatter-heads"//
im 12-0,n to me ur nothin cuz u got more "loses-than-wins"//
my disses leave u a space in ur heart,got u fealin incomplete like the fugies "without-laruen"//
i look in the dictonary n under ur name i see nothin whats a "carson-jet"//
well uve one some battles but loset more and after i add a lose ull be a even more "imbarsed-vet"//
checkin were u stay at n u jus post up "east-coast"//
i might beat some newbies but how the hell u expect to contend wid that "weak-post"//
u all ready a vet dam u must have no life u got over 700 post n only joind in "april-2003"//
decapatatin ur arms n legs,leavin nothin but stubs,ur lost in the battle field unable to "compete-with-me"//
i dont under stand ur rap ur soundin like "arabian-rappers"//
on this bord ur voice isnt hurd like claps from "handless-clappers"//
u no i checked ur profile n under ur intrest u posted"gambling-graffitti-n-ps2"//
like Frigthiners im carving a L on ur forhead but its not for loser its lose cuz thats the only "thing-im-handing-to-u"//
i dunno if ur aware of this or proudly speaking ur posting with ur sig repin "the-elements"//
this is the last time ur gonna wanna battle me cuz the lose is the only thing ull catch "thats-relevent"//
ur like a fat kid in scoccer,the only time ur involved in the game is when ur the "score-keeper"//
my punches his u so hard they dislocate n hang at ur sides,as i man handle u n scrub u as a "floor-cleaner"//
jet u aint ownin shit,even if the mic was ur cock u couldnt handle it wid 2 hands "on-ur-dick"//
ur none spitin flames,jus toxic waste,so when ever u spit im sick ta see how bad ur "lear-reaks"// <(lyrics)
ur only a new bie to me,so call me the teacher cuz i got the dagree ta "master-tha-game"//
compair my punches to missles who cares cuz eather way ur getin "blasted-ta-shame"//

aight peeps battle verse are in vote this up i no its long but its a hot battle aight make shure u post ur poll hola..............................

nice verse.....props....not hate.....lets vote dis battle peeps/////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

ill peep this after u peep my shit an dont forget to POLL vote or else it is useless
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=49647

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Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..

hands of god took this shit with better punches and better flow.. carson jet awesome battle man but hands of god had all round better shit.. awesome battle both sides

vote- hands of god

thanks much...apreciate the voting....lets keep this one runnin..................///////////////////////////////////////////////

i have reports from respectable sources that vilagepimp is hate voting on all of god's battles...so mods please un-count hisvote if he so happens to post up in here

im tired of handsofgod winning he prob made like 5 characters and get on them and votes so im going with carson jet on this one

VOTES LIKE THIS = BANNED -The End

Nice Battle...Good Verses, Both Shared Hard Punches

Lets Break THis Down

Best Lines For The Hands Of God:
i dont under stand ur rap ur soundin like "arabian-rappers"//
on this bord ur voice isnt hurd like claps from "handless-clappers"//
u no i checked ur profile n under ur intrest u posted"gambling-graffitti-n-ps2"//
like Frigthiners im carving a L on ur forhead but its not for loser its lose cuz thats the only "thing-im-handing-to-u"//

Best lines For Carsonjet:
slip inta dis like a nigga wit a limp dik surcim-sized fukkin witta fat bitch//
banana peels on way u lines-be-peelin mine....along a code witta R&B battle glitch//
sik witta mic...literally sik witta mic//
spilled chunky vile, undirected like a first-time-cummer for a tike//
sike//.....

Flow=Carsonjet
Punches=The Hands Of God
Worldplay= Hmm...Even But Leaning Towards Hands Of God
Multies=Carsonjet

Overall I Think That Carsonjet Just Went On Rolls Of Hard Punches, While Hands Stayed With Just Average Punches BUT WAS Consistent, Big Ups...Carson Got A Little Weak In The Begginging...And Even The Finisher Wasnt As Good As The Slip In, But I Just Enjoyed His Verse More...More In Depth, Wordplay Was Good, So Ima GIve IT To Carson By A HAIR Literally

Good Battle
Vote=Carson