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A lil WHATEVA
IP: DF45 9C15
some bitch called me disaster,so i put a axe in her head//
i said she cudnt call no more,so her mom called up the city feds// locked up and fed up,i write death notes to try and amuse me// send em to granny Frannys house,now she got the prison bully to come and abuse me// "help,help,this faggots tryin to stabb my butt open// know im hopein my prison homies will run in and cut his ear lobes open// by know i had him chokein,heard scary noises as he was talkin// had to punish him and hide the evidence,now hes in pain as he is walkin// fo'real i mauled him,i got the plot,and grannys to be a dead bitch// i had her for a lovin family type,but now convinced that shes an old witch// some kind of old snitch,plastered coke and shed let the feds know// i had to burst the bag and throw it away as i sung-let it snow-let it snow-let it snow.. jus a lil wack --wack--WACK lil sumthin cuz i was bored.....what ya think of my "mayb" start to a song sometime..?? holla with ya oppinions..!! |
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IP: 2FE6 F003
practice.practice.practice.practice.practice.pract ice.practice. nuff said.
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IP: 2DFF 5E3E
Yes, agreed!
You know you can do better, hell, your gonna be hitting clubs with me in the near future, just needs practice, perfect the flow, add more multi's, a couple more internals, maybe more wordplay / similies / metaphors. . . .nice to see you up here though man, go check my piece with Sand. Peace! |
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IP: DF45 9C15
yeah....vortex...you know that wasnt 0.01% of what i can do....that was sumthin to pass the 5 mins till mtv diary of meth and red came on....haha....seriously tho....i sed my self it was wack.....u know i can do better tho...lol...piaz..!!!
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