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Old 06-07-03, 09:21 PM   #1
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Lightweight Title:[Champ] LyricAli (5-1) vs. X-Signals (4-1)

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Check in's by Monday
Verses by Tuesday
Voting ends Thursday

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No bolding or quoting of lines to make them stick out
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Old 06-07-03, 10:11 PM   #2
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Yo i want in on this im new
 
Old 06-08-03, 08:53 PM   #3
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In for p3.
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Old 06-10-03, 03:45 PM   #4
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man see wtf i had just posted my check in this is bullshit someones deletin my shit
 
Old 06-10-03, 04:47 PM   #5
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all i ask is for yall to atleast read both verse's


listen cali this'll be twice i ripped ya so its clear the fake is fuck'd
i'll pull out a shotty, make ya DODGE and i aint talkin bout creatin trucks
i run wit mask'd murderer's you just duck and run wit shame
punch ya and have ya spinnin like the dudes avy above ya name
past-preasnt wont have to worry bout ya comin home im sendin the kill
and c'mon we all know that p3 stands for ya percentage of skill
think im not murderous come on bro my motto is hide and kill
looks like someone murder'd wak and he left ya that verse inside his will
kill this bitch cali at any cost sendin blows to his neck and jaw
before you call me wak & weak rember who gave ya ur second loss
the text is raw,im sorry but i saw the avy and had to laff
cause i know if your dad seen ya post his pics on the net he'd beat ya ass
see ya bleedin fast, dead & cool is how ima leave this fool
but i change'd my mind, cause if i kill cali who'll be left to clean my pool
yanno if p3 came along askin to vote on the battle up in here

No D.R. or hata votes


^^id just point to the fuckin rules and hey thats ya answer there
ima bash this queer, claim's he's a thug but whatch im reppin holmes
told him,hit the block if ya wanna sell drugs and he punch'd a steppin stone
i put up 18 lines, and cali claims he's and achololic who you think you are
he thru up on my last liquer stand so id be foolish to waste another bar
 
Old 06-10-03, 07:50 PM   #6
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He signs in forty hours late yet it's legal? For christ sake.. I imagine I'll edit this if I find time to write something.
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Old 06-10-03, 07:52 PM   #7
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oh c'mon i posted my verse in on time check ins mean shit cause you shoulda poste'd a no-show verse and 40 hours late no try an 30 mins because i posted at 12:30 where im at just turnin tuesday
 
Old 06-10-03, 07:55 PM   #8
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Just turning Tuesday? Even if you live on the god damn International Date Line it's after Tuesday.. Besides, that's still twenty-four hours after the deadline. . Stop clogging the thread, I'll see if I can find time.
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Old 06-10-03, 08:13 PM   #9
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what its still tuesday here where im at now so i dun know what clock your lookin at but find time and madd ya can delete these useless post if ya want
 
Old 06-10-03, 11:33 PM   #10
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..Masked and Murdering..

Should he sign in or not? The debate turns the debator to a teary kid
Finally he decides, "Yes!".. And decides to sign in later than his period (he's been raped!)
No personals.. Soft punches like Kool Aid Bursts go unconceived and unnoticed..
X's verse tied to the suicide note, "I can't believe my son wrote this."
From down under, he is.. Where you going, X? Not Erick, but he leaves the Sermon
X has Animal Planet on lock.. A handful of paper towels and views of Steven Irwin (Crocodile Hunter)
Does he really want a war? Full-scale, I drop verbal bombs with my attacks..
I think he'd rather stick to thumb-wrestling.. Or the so-called Conflict in Iraq
Check the rear-view, sonny.. Like Jack be Nimble, I'm burnin but nifty
X rolls by the retirement home, like a hardass, he's seen turnin' up the Fifty
Real cats know he's fake.. In Evolve's battle, he needs help feelin the mental ropes.. (check battle, he didn't understand rhyme scheme)
A lyricist? X works for UPS, but today, I'm the one who's sealin the envelope..

!!! TO VICTORY !!!

I turn left, turn right.. Turning Signals more than a school bus driver
These are your tools of the trade? Being so weak, your tools must tire
Especially on this occasion, he's outmatched like the Nets against the Spurs..
Ali gives X the flinches.. Added to a list of sicknesses, with terets he'll seem disturbed..
Let me finish him in four.. Swept by the wind, I'll easily retain my belt..
Seeing how he cheated and lost.. He'll pull a Wicked Witch of Oz, complain and melt..
I'm a mortician.. X is finished, FATALITY!! The morgue has arrived to expose the dead..
Mad Man, I expect you to wise-up.. Realize the crime scene and close the thread!
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Old 06-11-03, 01:46 AM   #11
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^^ umm yeah...

not bad from x... a few decnet personals in there...
But ali's punches and wordplay were much better

the closer from ali was ill....

anyhow.. vote ali
 
Old 06-11-03, 10:20 AM   #12
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I'm a Have to Aggree with Chrit^^
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Old 06-11-03, 11:51 AM   #13
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lol whoa a buncha bullshit lol

how the fuck can trife's vote count when all he said was he agree'd wit chrit buncha bullshit thats why i asked heads to atleast read both verse's fuckin garabge ass voters
 
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think im not murderous come on bro my motto is hide and kill
looks like someone murder'd wak and he left ya that verse inside his will


^^^


lmao that shit was dope nice punchs and shit alotta quotes but id have to be here all day

dope ass verse from
x

cali had some different shit too alotta advanced rhyme's and shit i liked the closer but there werent no where near as many punchs and word-play from cali as it was from x


vote x
 
Old 06-11-03, 12:16 PM   #15
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I'm voting X.. his verse did have better personals as chrit said.. and I thought it flowed better, the vocab was better in it as well, the only thing cali really had goin' 4 his verse was word-play..

vote= X

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