ok ok yo dawg check it it like dis we got a 10 line minimum and u r to spit ya shit asap no first or second we both go at same time alrite

how do we go at the sametime?
how am i gonna know your readdy exxxxxxxplain/////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

ok

ima drain ur ass like a water jug//
mofucka this aint no faggot hug//

So stepp off befo u get put in ya place//
u cant rhyme ya calie bitch u a disgrace

u remind me of the dude from fresh prince of bell air//
except ur not rich ur not cool and ur losing your hair

i hate to destroy and dominate mofuckin people like you//
cuz that means ya ugly ass bitch has no1 to come home to

people say i dont throw fuckin punches hard enough and it gets on my motherfuckin nerves//
Fuck all of yall stupid fuckhead this fuckin shit aint nothin but a mixutre of fuckin words

To all these motherfuckin people that consider themselves motherfuckin freestyle critic//
Yall mothefuckers aint got a clue what good raps are u fuckin fags tryin to be cool u make me sick

Who the fuck made yall the fuckin experts of what people say//
a fourth of u may be right but the other 75 percent are just gay

So none of yall better fuck with me im a tough motherfucker//
My spits are like Pee-Wee Kirkland in his prime at Rucker

Half of yall mothefuckers here probably dont know who im talkin about//
I dont like to consider the shit i type a spit cause its more of a shout

i spit razor blade bars//1
that leave permenet scars//2
im so i'll you cant even respirate
the same air its werser then sars//3
im so way ahead of my time were i come
from humans gone further then mars//4
so ill my sickness spread ferthur then your moms//5
your mentilly challanged if you havent figuired out
what tha last line ment//6
this aint 10 bars is the new ten comanments//7
im just here to do damage like a football line-man//8
have 80 pound bolts going through your hole body//9
my punch lines strike like lightning//10

drastik stands up and says

with this mic i shall let there be light//
so bright it shall blind your sight//
ohhh thats tha reason why it aint making sense
u know!... all tha stuff you type//
shit i fell asleep before i finished your verse//
your right the only place your punchlines get is to your nerves//
ha they aint affective hhha hha haa you probably very sick of me//
but your puches only tickel me//
jmoney wacknese's little mini me//
like sadom hussein i studyd your location im sendin a missel//
oh it just hit u hey people! we gotta clean tha shit were's tha
toilet tisue//


next time dont spend half of your diss y-ning

oh and say son you talkin about fresh prince who's really tha gay one

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votesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ight... umm drastik took it cuz he came harder, his rhymes was somewhat ok but needs to extend them, the otha guy was just whack
hit up my battle against youngblood, it'll be at top

Man, I am going to have t give that battle to drastick. His flow was better and he had way more lyrical stabs then the other dude did. I will make it official when I get t my 100 post, s I can actually vote.

yea...like everyone else said. this battle goes to drastick. came alot harder with better punches and better wordplay. good shit from both though.could you vote on this shit

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=55989

thanks

yo drastik took this by betta punches, but good battle. ey drastik please check out my battle with kerrdezzy and poll vote for the best verse aight!!!!!

poll vote- drastik

Alright drastick I can now offically vote, s can you drop your vote over in the thread where I am battleing copone? It's on this page, so just go vote.

yo i think drastik took this one i cant poll vote yet but i just thought id state my opinion... if u guys would hit my battle up that would be tight

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=56075

yo man i tryd votin but it wont let me i dont know why but ill try to fix it everybody sayin 2 check they shit i'll vote but i am havin trouble with the poll peace