Those captivating brown eyes/
That beatiful smile/
That walk,that talk,she cant be taken,how?/
Why?, dont she see that I love her?/
I guess not,but I will always be in love with those brown eyes/
She is a queen in disquise,yes I can tell/
But all I do is stay hoping,waiting at the wishing well/
I throw a quarter in,but to my suprise/
I see those big beatiful brown eyes/
I turn around asking ,"What do you want?",rudely/
But to myself I'm in a daze because she's talking to me/
She tells me of her troubles and I sit and listen/
Watching them brown eyes sparkle and glisten/
She's having boyfriend problems!,oh goody!/
I'm just smirking and saying "HOW COULD HE"/
But then I stop and think about them/
Then I look up and see them brown eyes glimmering just like a gem/
I could never hate like that,no I can't take advantage/
Their broken relationship,I must heal the damage/
I fixed it feeling good,looking to the sky above/
I could never ever take advantage of the girl of I love/
Even though she is tooken,I know our love will rise/
And I will for ever love those beatiful brown eyes/



based on a true story.....sike.lol

DAMN CAN I GET SOME FEEDBACK.

"based on a true story.....sike.lol"


lol...youre lucky it isnt. this was good nonetheless...its wierd how the guy helped her instead of hoped for them to break up

It shows that he rather see her happy,no matter what.Even if it is with someone else.It is kind of like a true,except I already go with Cymone...thats my heart.

i know y this wasent too good

you havent had no pussy....

get some tang youll start droppin them ill shits

^dumbass.

Nice post gadget. I was feelin it a lot. Really sweet, with great imagery. Maybe you're the one that needs the lesson in love Kapone, cuz when you REALLY, TRULEY, love someone, its like he said..you'd rather see them happy than anything else, even if its not benefiting you.

Nice piece, gadget, stay up n keep postin.

yea girl? i am in love go peep one of the fuckin 500 open mics or poems ive dropped over the last week, then tell me some shit, and gadget i was fuckin wit you

I know you was playin Kapone.You also doing some shit like editing other people's posts.lol. Also Kapone I do get pussy,can't you see.DaGyrlRemarqabL was feelin this.So imagine I was on the street and I said something like this.thats easy pussy.

yea, maybee, but i dount it

cuz, i think shes phrantik... but whokows

and yed i am drink

you think im phrantik? wha?

Easy Pussy?! um i doubt it too.

lmao. yep.. im DaGyrlRemarqbl....
lying this whole time... your an idiot.
she is much more modest than me, plus
i bet she could beat me in a poetry battle.

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Gadget good shit dawg I felt it deep....
Lol but i also agree with kapone... bro you need some pussy real bad.. everybody gets it who tries... I can see it thats she want some in those brown beautiful eyes... LOL