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Old 06-12-03, 10:09 AM   #1
Orikle
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"Last Breath"

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"My Last Breath"

With the last breath left, I grace with traces of my air..//
I always find my feet, look down in failure to see a pair..//
Care takes itself and skates along with thin ice..//
Experiences strike luck out, end near, missed out twice..//
Vulnerable to the visions, reality and paradise entice..//
Chances leave the hand as on the board hits dice..//
Hope to be like archers with approach, straight to the point and concise..//
Eyes connect with my figure, I’m a vulnerable soul..//
I’m driven further down hall, and I’m distanced from ma goal..//
I think bout sitting on ma lunch just to get on a roll..//
Have you ever felt the hope drain from life, following the sweat..//
I let my heart grow cold, I only got a license to Chill..//
Will I ever be Ill? Still I hold on tight and sign off on ma will..//
It smashes the heart down hard like a weight on ya chest..//
Doubt instills the mind, should I once again wear the vest?..//
Well I’m best when I feel safe but would I be cheating the test?..//
Destined for a fate met by every single creation..//
Why cheat it, why attest it, we all got a heavenly affiliation..//
Who defeats it? Sin cannot get past, any-the-nation..//
Touched by a soul, the long look on the face..//
Sparks my mind to memories, of past moments in this place..//
Speech erects my senses of sounds, I’m coherent to approach..//
Advice given, “never allow anyone to take to pride and poach!”..//
I’ma yield the attacks advanced upon myself and raise my shield..//
As I swallow my pride with my “last breath” and take the field……


........................Pz........................ ...
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