Blunt---> Yo, What Makes a real Mc?
Bazzy----> an ability to come up with a dope track on cue...
Blunt----> Tha's what I'm say'n....

check it...
blunt's verse

graphic visions written in inscriptions
inlighten minions listnin', it's tha rap mission
competition wishin' they could have this instinct.//
thinkin' it's instant, no practice, no resistance
right, like this comes natural, like a human sense
in a sense it is, not everyone posesses this gift
obsesses with it, for insentives of gettin' rich
I'm relentless when I'm stretchin' lips
vocal aerobics, to most it's hopless
pointless even try'n to compose this
bazzy, you know it, only volatile explodin on a mic
exposin' frauds try'n to conquer thaq spot light
bitches with sponsors to drop hype
respondin' to problems for attention, it's not right
only about 5 percent of emcees have right to be mentioned
the ones who had a life-a tention, opression
digression, depression, the sad thing
most become objects of forensics at the end
expended like resourses, never had a chance to record it
can't defend against media forces, an un-beatable fortress
but we need it to flourish, and grow to this forest
before we loose focus; slewed into tha vortex
of forced-death, fuck it.. tha chorus next....

HOOK X2
I'm a real emcee.. what are you
who are you? ya feelin' me?
'cause ain't no-one feelin' you

BAzzY's verse

"The weak die while denied over our everyday supply//
Haters hoggin' the mic when the real dont even get the chance to defy//
Half these rap-stars today gotta rely on their looks to get by//
And a "hood" background means they rhyme-tight unlike the skillful white-guy that tries till he die//
Born with a "gift",means you also born with a "curse"//
Like whilst rhymin' swift,theres still a time where you and the mic will disperse//
But I hold on with every verse,and reverse what those doubters say and think//
Cause ignorance and haters actions has got hip-hop on the brink//"

blunt----> yea, you know what I'm say'n...
Bazzy ----> fo-sho blunt, the rest-a ya fake emcees out there better take this as a lil piece of advice....

BOTH----> we-out..

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this had a nice quick free flow to it...I liked it alot...nice collab

Thanx but I could only do 8 lines

Any more feedback??

All is wanted

The first verse was very nice. It had good content, stayed on topic, flow was on point, multis were exsistant...Everything was there and kicking....Second verse wasn't as good. Flow was off, content was blah, and multis were non-exsistant. I wasn't feeling it at all. Hook was good too. Overall, I'm only liking half of this collab, but nevertheless, Good effort from both. Pz!

The flow was nice, first thing I have read on Open Mic in sometime but its good enough to make me wanna read some more again. Nice collab.

thx 4 feedback... keep it comin'.. 1

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Blunt Ripped it
overall ill
second verse shoulda had a lil more mmmph
But shit was a banger