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Old 06-13-03, 07:04 PM   #1
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Talking I Hate Ya

IP: E36E DDC4

I'm in the key stone state, traveling with keys, transfered weight.
On the drug scene, makin friends and enemies, flippin g's, modern day tony montana trapped in the 70's.
got you askin what happen, did he just say that, knowing damn well my reply gone comply with stay strapped, page napped.
like i just stole yo rhyme, ripped it out yo mind wrote it down and claimed it was mine, snaked ya line.
cause i know what you capable of, comittin murder, oj type nigga gone loose yo baseball glove,
covered with blood, yo face leave my dna trace, evacuating premisses with a gadge placed at my waste
give me a taste of that rough roughed and raw, I'll drink it like liquor distroy my liver and replace mine with yours
moving swiftly on the streets while watching behind me, living is costly, breath is free and you pricelessly dying blindly
i'm on a mission like shaggy was in the movie with scooby, drunk while getting high smokin all types of dubbies
come move me, show me yo strenght and nature, deminish my mind and state yo crime buy a patch cause i'm gone have to deflate ya, I HATE YA
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Old 06-13-03, 10:07 PM   #2
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madd nice
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Old 06-13-03, 10:13 PM   #3
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Hmmm...Another gangsta.

This was decent. Some parts I liked, some were okay, and some I think were shitty. Seems as if the drop got better towards the end. Overall, not bad. Seems that you tried to get a good rhyme scheme going, but it fell off at times. Keep 'em coming, gangsta. Haha. Pz!
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