Kapone:

When dark lines meet light ryhmes
When loose is tight and wrong is right
When night is day and every things a twist on sumthin
You know ive met Pesimistic and a conflict erupted


I wait to say i love you to her face
then say it for the most magic of our days
moments fly by with you in my eyes staring at brilliant skys
but to my demise u removed the disguise and u wit anotha guy
roller coaster ryde on my insides playin games with the lies
but i fogive u and we got on with our lives for the second time
love stronger then ever thru our endevours i still love you
and then you come thru that love isnt just built for us 2
so i look deep in my wounds for an idea of what could be true
so i consult my friend the pesimist "what should i do?"



Chrit:

Goin from a first kiss to being remiss,
It all proves some love dont mean shit
The way my heart has been ripped
Is why I appear as a serious pessimist


You wanted all my secrets so I spilled it/
Little did I know I gave you my heart for you to kill it/
I loved this chick, then she goes off on another dick/
How sick it made Chrit... being in the game of love a second pick/
How'd this happen... was true love, not shit built on sex/
Preparing for war now, time to take the rage out on faggots necks/
Fucked with the wrong emotions now all the friends are on the hit list/
Fuckin right, Chrit's pissed... About to cripple kids over this shit/
Mission accomplished yet nobody knows the turmoil left inside/
Revenge is sweet, but cant compare to the bitteness of the tears I've cried/


When dark lines meet light ryhmes
When loose is tight and wrong is right
When night is day and every things a twist on sumthin
You know ive met Pesimistic and a conflict erupted

Goin from a first kiss to being remiss,
It all proves some love dont mean shit
The way my heart has been ripped
Is why I appear as a serious pessimist

and disregard the flow problems on my part ya'll

was venting and it just came out that way

nic drop to both , likes pretty much all of , some weak points in flow but i am disregarding them (chrits orders, lol)

serious... that shit came out so fast... couldnt mess with it ya know...

its like a vent ya know... just getting shit out

That was definitly tight..

The set up was really well chosen, liked how you mixed hooks.

Chrits flow was off, but when venting it doesnt matter to me, because your writing down your feelings

Kapone had a good verse to, nice usage of words..

Reminded me more of a poem then rap

^^^ and that flow actually changes towards the end....

goes from a disappointed delivery, to rage then goes back down to reflection ya know...

so the flow is there if you really look...
I wish I could give you the audio ya know

to.the.top.

2pac 'n' nas are shit they can't rap
.................................................. ...
2pac 'n' nas are shit they can't rap
.................................................. ...

maaaaaan, wtf... fuckin freeposters, get on wit ur scerdy ass

to.the.top

yo i liked this whole thing

*After reading whut chrit said about the flow went back read it and got it*

Anyway nice delivery and nice werd usage through out

^^^werd

this shit was hott
flows were good
and the whole idea was pretty creative
i never woulda thought....
but it was a hott drop overall
9/10

__________________
Only God can judge me, Who THE FUCK IS YOU?!

^^word