Yo if u heard tha song or have tha instrumental it would be an advantage coz this is a parody and it gonna be audio but i jus want some feedback.

Tha Jump On - Jump Off Parody

Hoes......Hoes......Yo ladies this tha jump on right here,
Hoes......Hoes......Hoes.it's W.E.S.T

It's been flop for a minute now it's back at tha jump on,bitches at tha bar ready ta get tha hump on/
step up coz westy bout ready to get his crump on,in tha graveyard is where i get ma funk on/
at home all we wanna do is smoke,when we at tha club we buyin everybody vodie and coke,fly westy dressed in burburry,i'm tryna get into a pussy that furry/
spread std's thats what a real playa do,keep it protected coz i'm lookin out for ma self fool,when i'm lookin at these girls they good enough to eat,after i've had a feast then out come tha beast/
i aint tha best still plenty need for improvement,ma dick bout as big as tha war against Iraq coallition movement/
i like to give it to ma girl front to back,if u aint givin it to doggystyle then everyone hearin u pussy wack/

Chorus

this is for ma peeps with with tha big willy's tha rubbers tha 10's,OPP and willin to go behind there friends,jumpin out tha taxi with tha timbs,how that feel,live good,Dundee,New York,worldwide,to all ma homies in Pete's stay high,if u never had sex before can i jus say why why/

it's W.E.S.T i don't mind fuckin hor's,aint ma fault that ma dik bigger than yours,i'm reppin tha D,you ladies rippin your drawers,we get into tha bed and u gettin on all fours/
i got ma eye on tha girl that looks as if she can deep throat,when she suckin mine it get her dizzy like she on a boat/
let me show ya wot bein a playa's about,when i'm lookin for a bitch i'm lookin lika football scout/
grind on that ass,offer tha bitch some cash when she accepts u must be bout to dash,yo pussy aint a thing but don't fuck tha same bitch twice,if u doin that ya might catch genital lice/
rub on ma dick toss off ma dick give me some head,let me tap that ass it's a master class,wot i'm about is tight pussy and sweet ass/

Chorus

this is for ma peeps with with tha big willy's tha rubbers tha 10's,OPP and willin to go behind there friends,jumpin out tha taxi with tha timbs,how that feel,live good,Dundee,New York,worldwide,to all ma homies in Pete's stay high,if u never had sex before can i jus say why why/

enterin tha world of hash smokin cheech and chong lovin dude,if u take ma dope we gettin into a feud,u wanna smoke with me coz u say i'm sexy and u wanna leave me coz u say i'm stingy/
Got a dealer in japan and a bitch tahiti beleive me dawgs i got enough dick to help tha needy,no need to be greedy i got dealers that got's plenty got ounces for tha playa's all different flavour's/
no masturbation that aint tha way to go,if i want some pussy i'm givin your gurl a page yo,bitch shake your body body wiggle your totty totty when ma dicks in it gonna hurt some batty batty/
i'm tha dawg that put tha play in tha playa,michelle geller put tha buffy to tha slaya,cumin through like ma dick is a gear stick and yep i'm in gear,no need to want big poppa is here/

Chorus

this is for ma peeps with with tha big willy's tha rubbers tha 10's,OPP and willin to go behind there friends,jumpin out tha taxi with tha timbs,how that feel,live good,Dundee,New York,worldwide,to all ma homies in Pete's stay high,if u never had sex before can i jus say why why/

Yea...Yea...Yo keep it real this goin worldwide...W.E.S.T a real gee two thousand and tha pussy free...why not i'll make ur gurl hot...cum on her tits and hit her spot...This was tha parody haha.

not too bad fo a remix
This was ok accept


Girlz ready to get their hump on instead of jump on
i would a used that line
No hatin just explainin

No probs first time i had positive feedback from u,lol.Comment taken into consideration,Thanx.

Peace

Uppin this for more feedback peeps.

Peace

See i like it that much better

Uppin

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was aight for a remix, needa work a little on sum areas but i liked it overall 7.5/10

keep doin that stylez ma man

Uppin dawgs.

Peace

Uppin dawgs.

Peace

Make An Audio...I Bet It'd Be Twice As Nice As This

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This is a dope sig.

Would be a hot audio when i drop it i think.

Peace

its gonna be a hot audio, but as for here it was good. i do funny remixes too sometimes, so if i drop any than peep it

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