10 lines...5 barz max..
15-30 minute drop rule
no dik krew hate votes
dont care who spits first ...drop in 30 mins tops..

yea who eva spits first does it dont matter............................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......................goodluk

confusion...
5-barz..
aight...doin dis quik...wanted more barz..but he said 5 max...
i split u like 4 atoms in particle development di-fuse-in//
simply amusin, i can see why peeps be call-in u confusin, face it 'g' ya losin//

.....yo chek it.....
i seen more spit from de-hydrated mimes in central park//
iv' set my scope ta mark, best believe only lines u fill 'inside-a-chalk//

u can call me 'space', cus after hittin my 'barz' 4 times im out-ya range//
u can suround me like 2 'alt's but still im stronger, believe it-aint nada changed//

crissed crossed dna witta prostethic spit u still cant de-cipher what it is i bring//
caught up in the wanna be act of bling-bling, cash money fuk it-i rather let my spit sing//

listen-u 16 yr old fella from detroit, this aint a scene or cut from 8 mile, get the point?//
no-guess not- still up in my face, guess im have to back-my'space', and erase my lines so i dun disgrace ya ghostly face//

step up to the plate.....
waitin on u confusin.. .. .

u just made a big mistake space , //
you only gots 30 minutes so u bete pick up the pace, //
im out to win his rate race, confront any nigga face to face if thats wut it takes to convince them im an Ace, //
feel these vibe waves, //
u want me to take u serious?//
u out ya mind u delirious, //
ur a bumb u joke, you only text battle cuz stpepin up to the mic would only result in a choke,//
ya mite croke frum d oin oto much coke,//
that shit adds up on u tunin u into an old folk, //
barely abel to walk, cant sleep with out taken a toke,//
I dont care who the fuck u are, //
wuts wit u maken that rule,. max 5 line bars, //
stupid nip u sick you got sars?lol//
This is my time to shine im comin up son raisin up like the break a sun, /
winin this shit for fun , /
step aside b4 i take u for a ride just sit down dog ur done......../

my vote goes to space, confusion ya now i kno why they call u that, its cuz u write ur lines dat it gives everyone confusion...lol... try next time to make your verse more organized so its easier to read

punches-space
style-space
flo-space
wordplay-space

vote-space

space made dat otha nigga look like a fukn foo.....vote goes to space cuz he had dat shit from da beginnin.....

ok uppin...........
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Damn,Space got this with better punchlines flow and more knowledge....smart rappers..he ripped confusion in the first 2 bars....keep elevating confusion...you'll get there



hit up the battle that in my sig.

ok uppin...........
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Space friggen merked this kid to shit, i like your stuff say your a free agent i'd bouch for u in UT.. nice shit man

vote == space

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thanks.....uppin
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Confusion is DQed, He is currently in over 2battles and the limit is 2battles at a time, hes battling at

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=63683

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=63674

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=63721

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=63702

***Confusion Is Disqualified***

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