aight drop in 15 min then....ten lines.......you know the rules........

yo collector u soft like a song written by ~elton john~/
pussy mc who writes rhymes in a ~belton salon~/
u faggot enough to be ~elton's~ damn lover/
maggot cough a skeleton of ur asshole cover/
i will burry you six feet under the soil/
body of a faggot under ground wrapped in aluminum foil/
tumb reads "here lies the body of a homo" tough luck/
he posted ~elton~ as his biggest promo" what a schmuck/
collector ur bout to collect ur fisrt loss/
when you cross the boss you get tossed like the sauce/

I hit metaphor wit lyrical blows so hard that his eye start swellin//
and tell him to take his chain of cause the ice not helpin//
i'm too skilled to be touched, espeacially by metaphor//
i'm so ill that when i spit, my rhymes could not be ignored//
when i flow you would think i'm crazy cause i'm too relenthless//
and i make sure my punchlines send this coward to the local dentist//
you picked the wrong fight when you came and messed with collector//
theres no hiding from me as i rip throught yo chest protector//
my flow is sharper than a razor that cuts yo vein deeper//
i'll put a gun to ya head and really give u a brain teaser//

I'm going with metaphore on this, He had some nice punches, Collector's verse didn't hit hard enough, and the rhyme pairs didn't really click that well (ex. metaphor/ignored, swelling/helping).

metaphore's shit was forced and just straight out weak to me, elton john/belton salon? come on now, but i aint votin cause of my post count plus collector is in my crew

no hate, just my opinion

good battle metaphore u got him on da punches n' flow. could u vote on my battle against MC Gambit

Yo, metaphore got dis....betta everythin'........................................ .............................................

Vote=metaphore

thank ya'll for votin, but i hope ya'll ain't votin for metorphe, because i'm a newbie, and ya'll don't want him to lose or anything like that

or i hope ya'll ain't doin this because ya'll tryin to get him to vote on ya'll battles or somethin like that

can we please get some more votes people, and keep it real.........and please explain ur reason for votin for the person u voted for

i can't believe all tha votes for metaphore he forced things horribly who tha hell rhymes about elton john even in a diss? lol well i think collector took it in my opinion............props to both
vote-collector

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my vote goes to tha collector........metaphore how many times did you have elton john in there? yea enuff so ima go with tha collector

Poll vote:collector

MAN im ashamed to be a supposed long termer on dis site meat came weak let his name down, how he 4-0 ill never no oh D/R,,,,, man collecter coulda spit simply "FUCK U" n woulda won dis battle........... for fucks sake anyway i red meta's verse and nearly died it was so whack then i read collecters and for the 1st half of it whanted to close this page and think i never saw dat shit,,,, then outta nowhere collecter stepped it up,,,, took dis easy vote=collecter

w0rd..

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