Eyedeal a.k.a. Verbal ShellS a.k.a. Verballyill a.k.a. Tha Prominence
Song: Hatred
AIM: PoeticThreat

yo yo niggaz that be jealous want me to get shot or snuffed/
and that’s because they cant do what am capable of/
they hate me wanna see me get deebod its disgust/
nothing near to love/
buts that’s all I wanna be shown no fuss/
Its like cause am hated I have to fall off like it’s a must/
Or by my looks people wanna hate on us/
I got talent, I aint just gonna be worth thousands/
Just millions by the medallions, that I be styling/
Player haters just being havoc/
Wish they could all disappear but this aint magic/
They wanna see my death, because me they detest/
Brings more tragic/
I don’t want to even be sceen rapping/
Just want to be sceen static/
But that can’t necessarily happen/
Haters wanna see me and nefarious vanish/
But that’s just only the haters/
That dunt want to see successful nigguhs getting paper/
Because we already established/
Sooner or later we gonna start getting more than karrots/
Am disliked, because I shyne more then lights/
When am rhyming or when I write/
Becauz lyrikaly all my shit is tight/
Am just trying to focus/
To much pressure when nigguhs revulsion/
Am just trying to make doe and earn a good proportion/
Becauz in my shit I put a lot of enfourcement/
Haters want me tortured/
They wanna me get arrested by selling ounces and quarters/
Get wasted and do some stupid but am sober/
Fuck haters I bust shells until its all over/
U don’t want to find out whose more bolder/
My skills don’t call it showing off/
Call it something you can’t do cauz it’s hot/

Let me get some feedback

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AyO hook me up witt some feedbacck peoples i wanna see if u feelin this or not.

yo this was pretty good for a newbe

this was aiight for a newbie but u need to get some spell check and shit.keep elevatin.peace kid.

Nice style homie.....I was likin this drop...The street style is hott...flowed good...But you do need to work on spelling.....Or maybe i'm wrong and you just typed it fast...either way this was a nice piece.....keep blessin....

yo thanks for the feedback. YO yo i know how to spell perfect but i like writing differ when i rhyme i have no idea why but it jus me.

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