things get mad from time to time
but thru the pain we remain me as yours you as mine
people tell us were wrong but we both kno the truth
people said that you cant find love so early on in your youth
but ever since a laid eyes on you a couldnt forget
But sometimes when you leave me i break out in cold sweats
wondrin where you are....how you are or what you up to
but a have faith in the relationship cuz a love you boo

if u worry where i go dont
if you worry if ill cheat on u i wont
if u love me youll see the truth in ma eyes
our relationship wount survive if we contradict or tell lies
honesty builds relationships and ull see what i mean
cause no matter what baby u and me were a team

Hehas that sorta power ova me when i look deep in his eyes
ma whole world around me vanishes..your the only thing in ma life
wen we hae fights a cant stand it but the making up is better
from the first time we kissed to that first love letter
i will always be with you in soul and in mind
in heart and in sprirt.shit love is really blind
but you make me see and you make me beleive
that your the only thing ill ever want and the only thing ill need
its tru what they said they only person who deserves your tears
should never see them fall and should stay loyal thru the years
and even if your seperated for months you still stay true
and have faith in the relationship and learn to love eachother too

if u worry where i go dont
if you worry if ill cheat on u i wont
if u love me youll see the truth in ma eyes
our relationship wount survive if we contradict or tell lies
honesty builds relationships and ull see what i mean
cause no matter what baby u and me were a team

so you can trust me and you can love me and you can see me anytime
and even though were apart sometimes i still see you when a close ma eyes
your hear with me all the time and i feel you all around
and when the room is silent at night i still hear your sounds
even though we broke up ages ago i still feel shit for you
A sit and wonder aout trick shit and if what you said was tru
and as you kno that thru the times it dont get better
its hurts worse than ever so i turn back to your letters
which tell me of how you love me and how you never want to split
tears roll onto the pages and start to smudge the dark blue ink
and as i wipe ma tears away and pull a fresh peice of paper to ma hands
i start to write down all ma feelings in hope that you will understand
so this is what i write to you ma plea of your forgivness
and to let you kno that in ma heart your love still lives

if u worry where i go dont
if you worry if ill cheat on u i wont
if u love me youll see the truth in ma eyes
our relationship wount survive if we contradict or tell lies
honesty builds relationships and ull see what i mean
cause no matter what baby u and me were a team

I luved this, ... you can feel it's straight from the heart. Nice flow and well written.
Keep droppin shit like this

deep shit chuck fuckin loved it nice http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=66819 check that out woosh

thanks peeps for the feed...uppin

nice shit

well written, good stuff

Very Good 8.5-9/10

Loads of emotion within the open mic n the flow is great never goes astray

Favorite Lines

things get mad from time to time
but thru the pain we remain me as yours you as mine

so you can trust me and you can love me and you can see me anytime
and even though were apart sometimes i still see you when a close ma eye

mistake wit puttin the hook first

aight all change it then lol

uppin