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Old 07-22-03, 06:25 PM   #1
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Something that's been in my head...

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I'm like Em in the way that I'm shady, busting out harshness while caring for my lady...
And she's just a baby, my little J.C. 16 months old but on her way ta 18...
Cuz they grow up so fast as time quickly pass, before I know it she'll be telling me to kiss her ass.
But that's the future, right now I'm her suture, holding life together cuz that's what I'm here fa.
Me and her moms sharin the work, still tight together cuz even in hard times love still lurks...
Family times set aside from my rhymes cuz they gots nothin to do with my lyrical crimes...
I cherish my homelife, more than I cherish the knife, ain't it funny how ya act with a kid and a wife?
But don't take me as soft, or ya'll fall from ya loft cuz I be merkin bitches the second they cough.
Not a young kid, my lifes already started, before anyone of ya'll, I'll be dearly departed.
But not by ya hand, or the rhymes from ya micstand, I'll be checkin out as an old man just like I planned.
And when my life is done my ashes will fly with the wind towards the sun so me and the earth can unite as one.
I only hope I last longer than my wife, cuz I'd hate ta think of her old, alone, solo the last years of her life...
Cuz old age is lonely when ya lose ya spouse, the kids don't visit much cuz they got they own house...
But I think I could hang alone, better than my bride, cuz I got this rap game buried deep inside...
Somethin ta turn to, something ta get lost in, somethin ta keep me goin when I'm dying within.
So, God, or whoeva, let me go last, let my daughter live a happy life after I've passed.
Let my wife be happy all of her days, let our love for each other, our family, never go astray...
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Old 07-23-03, 01:59 PM   #2
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Not one of ya'll has anything ta say about this?
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Old 07-23-03, 06:05 PM   #3
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I'm bein honest....very deep...personally i liked it...it had emotilon and feeling
that can make people feel sorta good and sorta bad...it was like poetry and
yet it had the elements that make it considered a rap...you got your point
through very cleary and it was a good point to......so i got one las thing to say
about that tight verse......
i hope your wishes come true dog....
peACE
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Old 07-23-03, 06:46 PM   #4
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You fuckin rock, Ace...

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nice..
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Old 07-23-03, 11:35 PM   #6
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say playa ya shit waz tight as fuck
tha consept and feelin ya put in to it
ya thought hard bout it hope end happenz
tha way ya want dawg !!!!!!Holla!!!!!!!!
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Old 07-24-03, 01:27 AM   #7
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this pacaso mac the "street avenger" it was straight i feel ya. keep doin ya thang dog.
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Old 07-24-03, 01:45 AM   #8
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i feel the same way dawg you put into words the same shit i feel maybe its cause i gotta little boy but for real you kilt that shit and i hope you get your wish dawg
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Old 07-24-03, 11:19 AM   #9
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Much thanks...

I appreciate what everyone said...

Alot.

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