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Old 07-25-03, 02:32 AM   #1
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Outer Reaches

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My mind is filled with thoughts, like an ocean it's 'swirling'/
Ideas boil to the top of my head, with the knowledge I possess/
And ill finesse, all boundaries I'm 'hurdling'/
I move silently across a dark valley 'like a breeze'/
My every move is calculated as I swoop 'through the trees'/
Nothin stoppin me i'm rollin over my 'enemies with ease'/
Breaking barriers with 'mach speed' all expected limits 'I exceed'/
My skill level is elevated directly to 'maximum'/
Nobody tryin to hate on me cause they know my skill 'surpasses them'/
Bad intentions are an extension of my 'personality'/
Sometimes the line is blurred between fiction and 'reality'/
I got this game wrapped up tight in my 'back pocket'/
Pulled it away from these haters for myself then I 'locked it'/
Endeavor to spit the illest sh1t and write the 'madest rhyme'/
Till my rhymes are heard throughout the 'ages of time'/
Dark images of pain and suffering 'enter my head'/
Sweat drips down my forehead as I 'lay on my bed'/
I'm in a open place in my dreams flyin over the 'open sea'/
Set sail on an unknown course to see what 'I can see'/
I really wanna roll up some if this diggity and 'get to lightin'/
Smokin all day cheefin out on this 'philly titan'/
My whole life is bottled in a small 'bottle'/
Never worry about the little things, I might not live till 'tomorrow'/
You can't spend all your time soakin in your 'sorrow'/
Don't let the bad thoughts penetrate yo 'head'/
Fill them with thoughts of oceans and sand 'instead'/
This is the only advice I have to give to 'you'/
The only person who can live for you, is 'you'/
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Old 07-25-03, 02:35 AM   #2
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nice flow to this...i liked it
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Old 07-25-03, 03:07 AM   #3
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Re: Outer Reaches

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My skill level is elevated directly to 'maximum'/
Nobody tryin to hate on me cause they know my skill 'surpasses them'[/B][/QUOTE]

Yo dawg that line right there said it all. Good shit definently.I liked the flow but i felt it kinda started to die at the end but it was hot no matter what!!!
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Old 07-25-03, 03:11 AM   #4
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Thx for the feedback peeps ...It is greatly appreciated...holla
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