20 lines
no crew
no hate
no dr
i'll spit 1st

hold ya HOURSES!, your FORCING!, ya CLOSING!, but everyone love POISON!, so fuck NOID!, OO-SHIT! you just realized my "FLOWS-SICK!", like "acid in OCEANS!", its SPOKEN!, plus you about to get "BROKEN!(broke up)", like "DIVORCES!"...

i'll CONTINUE, to SPINE-YOU! n PIN-DUDES!, "fuck a mark on the forehead", like sex wit a "HIN DEW!"...
get under 'GRAVES'-WIT-NOISES!, so "watch'em die", while I "R.I.P.'(rip)-A-CLOCK", but its like i "CHAINED A TOILET", cuz i got this "SHIT-ON-LOCK!"...
aint nothin could MATCH-HIS-DEATH!, cuz he BLEEDS-AT-FUSE!, please let'em "CATCH-HIS-BREATH!", Like i threw "TREES-AT-YOU!"...(tree's let out oxygen)...

HOLD-UP! you SLOW-FUCK! I pop SEVIN-AT-FACE!, plus you probably wouldnt "SHOW UP", if "HEAVEN-HAD-PLAYS!"...

i ain't gonna be here so up it when ur finished i'm goin campin fo da weekend

hows u name smokin dro when u don't no how to inhale all u do is blow//
like in prison when u was on yo kness givin guys pleasure like a hoe//
i'm like a fuckin needle cause my rhymes always on point//
my rhymes got u dazed like smokin a million joints//
yo kid.... u couldn't get high if u climbed a moutain//
i'll knock u out and have u drinkin my piss like a water foutain//
i'll shoot tecks at ya vest and bisect ya chest//
rip out ya lungs and throw them back at u so you can caatch yo breath//
spittin flames at ya grill,causin ya face ta melt//
you betta act like a orthodonist wit fucked up teeth and brace yaself//
kid i'll remove ya muscles,depleting all ya bulk//
shove ya heart into a orange juice cartoon jus to say i beat u to a pulp//
this just half tha onslaught and you already dying fast//
cuz i'll put tha metal to ya face like tha man wit tha iron mask//
matter fact,fuck bars,now tha 9 iz out bustin//
put bullets in ya cheek a make ya face turn red and i aint talkin bout blushin//

uppin 4 votes
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9-millimeter your flow was good good punches towards tha end a good multi or two, smokin dro your flow was tight good multis, good punches all together i was feelin it better.

Vote-------Smokin Dro

if i could vote it would be =9mm.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .............

now i can vote and i vote=9mm

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uppin 4 votes
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9 got this one

return the favor

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hmmm...Smokin Dro....u had some real nice wordplay in some parts...other parts were broken up and sounded shitty....but the clock and toilet line was nice....pretty good shit....9Mil....u had a really good flow....and ur punches were weak at the beginning but as u progresses ur shit started to get better also....i like the ortho line...it was nice....u also seemed to have more consistency and more rhymes in ur verse....so i'ma have to go with 9

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69234

peace
4:20

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uppin 4 votes
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9 milli gets this, simply for the punches, that put him past smokin dro, good spits to both but:

Vote = 9milly