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Old 07-28-03, 07:49 PM   #1
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neBo: Baby Renegade (lyrics... no audio yet. NEED BEATS!)

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Let me know what ya'll think of this! I will record it soon when i get a beat!
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- Lacked Love; Growin Up Actin A Thug And Stackin Drugs
- Looked Above For The Things That I Didn't Have Growin Up
- Constant Trouble Maker; On My Way To Jail In A Holdin Cell
- I Praise God; But Will My Lifestyle Lead Me To Heaven Or Hell?
- I Don't Understand; So I Live My Life Carefully
- Constantly Wondering Is There Anyone There To Care For Me?
- But I Do - - - So I Don't Give Up Without A Fight
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- Im The Last Of A 'One Of A Kind' Man; Should I Reproduce?
- Or Should I Let My Soul Go Carrying The Conceled Truth?
- Plant Seeds And Not Know If They Grow Crooked Or Straight?
- Close The Gate? LET IT GO; And Attempt To Trust Fate?
- But I Dont Wanna Trust Nobody; Too Many Fakers Out There
- Been Scarred Too Many Times From Cats I Thought That Had Cared
- So I Go Solo; Sellin Drugs To Petty Thugs
- Gettin Mean Mugs From Haters Below And Above With No Love
- So Tell Me? How Can I Love Or Trust Anyone Or Anything
- When It Seems Everyone Always Ends Up Another Fukkin Enemy?
- Fukk It; I'll Have Another 'I DONT GIVE A FUKK' Attitude
- Until You Mother Fukkers Can Show Me Some Gratitude

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- Hated On, From Evening To Break Of Dawn; What'd I Do Wrong?
- Are You All Really THAT Full Of Jealousy Or Do I Not Belong?
- Come To Hell With Me; Commit Seven Heavenly Felony's
- Jesus Tellin Me; Satan's Sleepin In A Cell With Me
- Right Next To Saddam; Uday... Qusay... And My Mom
- Insane Thoughts My Brain Plots Like Jeffrey Dohm (Jeffrey Dohmer)
- Im Loosin Focus; Smokin On Far Too Much Marijuana
- It Aint No Joke; Listen To Me As I Put It On Ya
- Troublesome Like Pac; But In My Own Kinda Way
- Hustlin This Pot; Hopin Jesus Will Show Me A Brighter Day
- Sometimes I Wanna Fly Away; And Just Say "Fukk It All"
- But I Wasn't Brought Up That Way; Im Too Tough To Fall
- I Wanna Come Correct And Take My Life To Another Level
- Lord Jesus Please Take My Soul Away From The Devil
- Everything I Know - Learned From My White Man's Ghetto
- And I Was Tought Not By My Father But From Neighborhood Fellow's
- I Realize What I Learned Then; Later On It Saved Me
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Old 07-30-03, 07:31 PM   #2
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record that ish bra'
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Old 07-31-03, 12:04 AM   #3
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this could be hot, if you record it to a proper beat....feelin the lyrics a bit, but its all different once its put on beat, its like it brings a different vibe type of shit you know what i mean.....


hope to hear this record soon....OnE




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Old 07-31-03, 04:24 PM   #4
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thanks yall... yeah i just need to find a good beat for it... i got a lot of emotion for this song to put out.
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Old 07-31-03, 05:15 PM   #5
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lol.. 100% of the time you write to the beat. not write then pick a beat.
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Old 07-31-03, 05:52 PM   #6
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i wrote it to a tempo... so it fits a certain tempo. i need to make the beat that has this tempo and i am fine
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Old 07-31-03, 06:41 PM   #7
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what tempo you lookin for?
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Old 07-31-03, 06:46 PM   #8
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i think it is 65 BPM... but i am not that good at shit like that...

my brother is good with beats and stuff... he just needs to make me a beat.

i wrote it to the Renegade beat from Jay-Z and Em... so whatever tempo that is.

do you have beats?!@?!?%!^?!
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Old 07-31-03, 06:50 PM   #9
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dogg i looked at your soundclick... and i like your song...

"for the love of it"

where can i get a full length of it?!
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i'll strech out the length tonight and try to match it up against the lyrics best i can.

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Old 07-31-03, 06:59 PM   #11
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or can you just let me use that beat to write a new song??? i really feel that one. i will even make the title of the track called

for the love of it

that beat is hot though man!!!
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