20-30 lines
i'll spit first ..............don't puss out

Ok da HoT oNe is here......

Can u tell me how i set the battle up wronng?? I just had one of my other battles closed to, for the dame thing..

Intro:
Hahahaha,sorry, I just had to start this battle off laughing//
he excepted my call out that's a great job at Mismacthing//
Style switch..............

The way you look I can see you have no articulation//
you need to stop rappin, for yo information you can never be a sensation//
your fat ass will die of starvation, in the creation, of my legacy//
now ill turn up the intensity, cause I can see you have no intelligencey//
put your world in a state of emergency, give you a taste of my hood//
comen into this battle thinken you can win you misunderstood//
go suck on Albert Einstein’s decomposed wood, you might actually get some brain cells in ya
head//
wait my bad genius’s cant bust a nut when there rotted away and dead//
yea you miss-read, now you can never ever be smart//
trying to flow from your heart but I’ve herd better rhymes from a fart//
your ignorant ill tear you apart, do you like the guys do in wrestling//
pick up a chair and bust it over ya head just to be interesting//
for now on you’ll be resting, lost your life never able to wake//
that’s the kinda corruption I make, all cause of 1 false mistake//
oh lord for goodness sake, how much does this kid need to be tossed//
just face it you lost don’t make me cause a nuclear holla cost//
its time to pay the cost, bitch time to give me my cash//
im sorry im a little to fast, beating you up and treating you like trash//
you better start sellin your ass, and change your name to Hot One hoe’s//
your sick painting your finger nails and toe’s, wearing some strippa’s clothes//
im Jack the rippa and anything go’s, and yes bitch you herd//
listen to every last word, nigga like you would lose a battle to Mark Walburg//
im like a iceberg, but your nothin like a titanic//
have you runnen scared in a frantic, put your howl world in a panic//
yes my words can be tragic, but not as tragic as your face//
dos walk up to a bitch and always gets a taste of some mase//
now this is a chase, you better brace and be advised//
I didn’t know how big a slut your mom could be but I was surprised.

....

Spit'z merciless rip out your tonsils 'n' decapitate your windpipe//
Consumer'z blind to “KID” writes so he infiltrates Storm as a spot light//
Exhale 'n' spit chemical aura intoxicate lungs suffocate the weakest scripture//
Leave you concreted to tha floor - clutter ambiance with dust and sand-mixture//
“KIDS” punches can't burn me so he put my verse on a disc to try for the same effect//
I'm sorry you're impotent, but this battle will fix things and leave you e-wrecked//
Simplistically your bonez fracture shattering your marrow structure, flesh eroding leaveing corpse un steady with no individual scaffolding//
Idealistically capitalizing relentlessly on miss fired punches towards my organs counter attacking flawless you still can't de liver suitably//
I got concrete punches, like violent cement, Throw shots at you, slap you like whores hittin erections, your punches got no shock value like poor electricians//
I'm anatomically destructive ill detach your fazed eyes from illuminated socket's plug in two generators so you can have energy after//

~Lets Get Started~

Cease Your Stature When Punchin Your Cerebrum And Cavern till ya Teeth Shatter to Pieces Of Plaster//
Defeated In Patterns your Weaknesses are Penis From Rappers even while Shakin Hands Wit Stick Shifts Ur Not Meeting My Standards!//
strike ya lungs till’ ya tonsils are sore and ya esophagus cord is ripped clean from ya oxygen source//
apostles of war shredding tissue from nostrils when gored while your troops are tryna throw piles of rocks at our swords//
tha only time this WOMAN could spit fire of tha top of her head is due to this serious miss-match//(Ya i called u a Woman!!!)
this dude is lyricaly unstable, if i put a target on my rear he still couldnt hit back an still got tha assertiveness to diss kats//
givin this mismatch whipelash you cant beat my shit if you hit me with a BASEBALL BAT on my ASS//
makin you smash and crash you couldnt SPIT RINGS OF FIRE if you LINED your LIPS with PETROLUEM GAS//

~Its Over~

If KID liked rap then i'd be what he's feelin, call me a lyrical demon//
and after receivin this brutal beatin, consider it a miracle to be breathing//
time for this seedling to start bleedin, by committin crimes from diseased lines//
spittin so ill, my rage brings contageous phrases that will leave u hospitalized//
i look a nigga eye to eye before i shine with rhymes, you'll lie beside//
your ancestors when the ink from my pen makes u dye inside//
please realize i spit sicker than vomit, depress u like a hopeless convict//
especially when your room for improvement has an eviction notice on it//

THAT IT IT OVER................

Upping for votes....

Upping for some votes...

I havbe voted on all kinds of battles so can u all return the FAV now...

both battle verese wore alittle long...

personals-COMPTON KID- but i didn't see n e out standing personals..

multi's-HOT ONE-"strike ya lungs till’ ya tonsils are sore and ya esophagus cord is ripped clean from ya oxygen source"..nice multi

vocab-tie..VERY GOOD VOCAB IN THIS BATTLE

structure-tie

punches-HOT ONE- easily..i didn't really see n e outstanding punches from compton kid if any..

high n lows of this battle
low- "now ill turn up the intensity, cause I can see you have no intelligencey"<---- mad struggling dude..i dun even think thats a word
highs- "even while Shakin Hands Wit Stick Shifts Ur Not Meeting My Standards!"<---- nice..i only picked one..but hot one had nuff hot lines.. n thats what made mi think hot one won...close battle tho compton shouldve came juss alittle harder...

you think you guys might b able to return tha favour

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69484

ill terrorist n me been uppin lik crazy plz vote on our battle..

Nice vote playa...

So it is 1-0 Right???

Dont knwo how this board does the voting yet cuz im new to this shit...

1-0 Upping..

I will return the fav..

[QUOTE]Originally posted by *bLaNkz*
[B]both battle verese wore alittle long...

personals-COMPTON KID- but i didn't see n e out standing personals..

multi's-HOT ONE-"strike ya lungs till’ ya tonsils are sore and ya esophagus cord is ripped clean from ya oxygen source"..nice multi

vocab-tie..VERY GOOD VOCAB IN THIS BATTLE

structure-tie

punches-HOT ONE- easily..i didn't really see n e outstanding punches from compton kid if any..

high n lows of this battle
low- "now ill turn up the intensity, cause I can see you have no intelligencey"<---- mad struggling dude..i dun even think thats a word
highs- "even while Shakin Hands Wit Stick Shifts Ur Not Meeting My Standards!"<---- nice..i only picked one..but hot one had nuff hot lines.. n thats what made mi think hot one won...close battle tho compton shouldve came juss alittle harder...[QUOTE}

I jsut love when people do this for me, people jsut seem to read my mind, but yeah hell of a battle.

Hit this up for me, people sleep on it because I am new.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69549

my votes goes to compton, betta punches and flow i found, but both verses were good, and both had nice punchs, but compton took it

please vote here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69405

2-1 Upping for more votes..

PS.. y we have to have 100 char. to post..

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ouch!! and i thought compton was gonna take this with his disses...cuz hot one u'r started off pretty damn wack but one tightened up a whole lot with the punches and flow, good structure...vote=hot one

peep this and vote
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...5398#post665398

^^^ Good looking playa..

3-1 Upping this shit for some more votes..

I will go peep that battle playa...


But i need someone to expalain this to me...

Is it 3-1 or 1-0..

At the poll at the top it says 1-0, but i have got 3 people to vote for me..can soemone help me?

Yo i've peepin comptons shit for awhile and his shit is tight he got this wit better punches..................hot one the beginning of yours was wack then i kept on readin and i picked up the flow it was a close battle but my vote goes to Compton Kid

nah i think hot one came harder wit his punches they was raw too

compton came hard tho

no beef vote

vote=one

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