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Old 08-01-03, 03:21 AM   #1
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True Beauty

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The question is what is the best part of a lady/
Breasts, butt, hair, feet, legs or eyes maybe/
Ask me the question I'll tell you it's something in the inside/
Where their feelings are kept thoughout this long lived strive/
Though I thrive to try to find more like me/
But as I hear my friends that becomes more unlikely/
Cause everyone only thinks about the body parts/
Looking past personality or what they say with the body's heart/
For me I know my love will come in full stature/
When I find a true one who won't make my heart fracture/
One that can hold a conversation without lickin her lips/
Who gains respect from men without stickin her hips/
So ask me what I look for I wont say good sex or booty/
What I'm looking for in this life..Is a true beauty/
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Old 08-01-03, 03:43 AM   #2
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For me I know my love will come in full stature/
When I find a true one who won't make my heart fracture/

~Best In Your Whole Rhyme...Flowed The Best~

Everyone Needs Someone When It Comes Down To It
After Seeing This you Will Probaly like Bouncedoggydogs
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It Started Off Simple With Your First Two Lines But While
Going Further Into It You Went Deeper Into It Somewhat

One that can hold a conversation without lickin her lips/
Who gains respect from men without stickin her hips/

~Hard To Find..Hopefully You Will...Some Stray From The Union~

Overall This Was Alright..Elevate And Check Out Some Of
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Old 08-01-03, 06:49 PM   #3
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I thought it was good and it was a kinda different topic...Good drop..keep it up...

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Old 08-02-03, 01:09 AM   #4
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For me I know my love will come in full stature/
When I find a true one who won't make my heart fracture/
One that can hold a conversation without lickin her lips/
Who gains respect from men without stickin her hips/


honestly thought this would be a freaky sex piece like all tha rest when i first started to read..but u gained my respect..lol...i dont know if u really follow what this piece says..but it was nicely put.....very blunt but nicely phrased...
nice piece
God bless..1..
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