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08-01-03, 10:41 AM
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A Niggas Lifestyle...
IP: A9BD 316A
Just a deep feeling yanno? Critique or spout what you all want. It's still got feeling to me...
Aight... He always told his moms he'd never be somethin that he's not... But hes droppin lyrics there on that chopped block, niggas get shot... Tryin to wreck shop up in a 7-11 parking lot... Poppin trunks on these cats... tryin to be big beatin cars wit baseball bats... Umbrellas witout nines... Niggas sittin there sniffin lines... All these niggas wit hoop dreams and tight schemes, dont even notice how hard reality seems... Tryin to live in another dimension... Thinkin they lives goin to get a extended extension... 21 years ol an 6 feet deep, didn't know jus one bullet could put you in a deep sleep... Back to reality and to his corner, should be dead at the coroner... But hes just young not ready to die... Livin his life not trying to live a lie... Gangs and hustlers, bitches and busters, always try to change his ways... But still clean he stays... Hes trying to prove wrong and to succeed... Showin a nigga can live a life like the one he leads... POP POP nigga bleed... Proven wrong, liein on the ground wit three in his chest... Jus like Pac fucked without his bullet proof vest... The neighbors are starin an the kids are cryin... He must feel like he's diein... Fightin for air, damn hes tryin... Graspin his wound cuttin it deeper with his diamonds... Hes gettin cold and it'll all be over soon... 21st birthday didn't even last till noon... "He Kept It Real" Will be tattoed on his tomb... Death and put to Rest.... Yeah, I know. A weak drop, but the simplest shit can have the deepest meaning, ya feel me? |
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08-01-03, 10:47 AM
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IP: AB76 0742
This was simple... but I could see the content... decent for a first drop. Rhymes were choppy in spots... but decent... my favorite line was...
'All these niggas wit hoop dreams and tight schemes, dont even notice how hard reality seems...' I was feelin' that... welcome, and keep elevatin'... Peace... |
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08-01-03, 12:40 PM
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IP: 2C30 9553
played topic and kinda basic vocab and rhyme scheme here. if you're gonna rhyme about the standard gangsta lifestyle shit then you gotta be creative or just be wack. originality is 50% of illness, try throwing in a few multis and some wordplay next drop.
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08-01-03, 04:02 PM
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IP: C1DA C961
Here's a little rap about a lifestyle. It break's like tihs:
Little fuckin' nigga's want the cream Things ain't always what it seems The crack makes a strange dream Knock Knock a little murder waitin' at the door Grab your tech to wreck and leave him bloody on the floor Bam Bam the murder is done Don't try to run away the chase has just begun Motha fuckas betta run So they don't devour the gun powder Take the two tech's and shoot it's gonna make it louda And how does the fucka keep endin up in fowl predicaments Take the mack 10 and rip through all the legaments Stop gawkin' start walkin' away 10 feet Or you'll end up 6 deep
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