yo this is a collab song me and thugzdocy put together, and in my opinion im real proud of it, let me know what ya'll think, we just put all our verses together so it wouldn't be 2 complicated, so here it iz.....

..::Intro::..
Why peepz try to be the man, be better than another do everything for
other peeps so they can look up to them?, it tikkles there ego?, but i think it is dumb be yourself
fuck what others think, be you...cuz even if you wack, without money .or you the man one thing we share ,
even if you the ruler of this whole planet earth you cant never change the fact that we all cryed at birth.



Pain is life but no one can refrain the nice,and we slay the wise, scared of their tongues advice//
With lungs spread wide we inhale the nugs of strife,hugs entice contentment, so satan make a slug the price//
From your brothers wife now know pain, i can be on my game but i can't control the rain//
And i can't console the slain or remold the brain, u control your fame, to get u got to give back the same//
This world is a bitch and she'll smack you maim, u want a crack at fame it's up to you to make us chant your name//
It aint all about fame, we livin live with eyes closed , protecting ourselfs to the pain and the real horror we are bein exposed//
Cuz its hard bein youself in a world where peeps always wanna be ''best'',you have to be the man be cool..//
..Make cash fuck the ''rest'', and than them so-called-friends tell you , ''dont mind the pain that you feel in your chest''//
Cuz you need to be gansgta .....you cant ''cry'' fuck that..take this coke, its gonna make you ''fly'' take this gun dont hassitate//
Pull it and put your real feelings to the ''side'', its ok i aint wrong, they cant hurt as long you with me.....your save, you dont need to ''hide''//
And rant and rave about the skill you purvey, u can build a wave but to the ocean you're still its prey//
This worlds instilled with hate, its time we spilled the weight...split the cake, open your mind and realize we're all build for great//
I'll knit a quilt of knowledge to distill our problems, large enough to fill the oceans, cover the prairies and slaloms//
Now stop...... talking and read the print ahead...life is bent with dread....cuz survival is a sprint to....... death//
But your scent is left so make sure u lend some help, tend to health and fuck the 22's man lend your wealth//
Dont forget your roots,.dont think when you have cash you can walk next to your boots...try stayin to be real//
And listen to your inside to what you to feel, no matter what they say, remember whats inside that shit is real//
Dont walk around like a puppet wrapped in seal, live you life to the fullest, do what you like but do it for you//
And dont forget to-stay-jus-real, cuz you the man when you do your own, make your cash and have your home//
You aint tough killin a man, you the man willin to save, cuz makin is better than breakin, but try not to end up like a slave//
Be a friend to self and know no one's feet fit your shoes...just cuz he looks hit by blues, what about your persistent abuse//
You constantly consume a rainbow of pills fill yourself with herb. and blow nowin it could kill but its the only way you be able to chill//
So judge.......... not unless you be judged first........... but know still that retaliation is the simple mans curse//
It hurts seein your brother.... in a hearse so think first man and know money can't quench... your thirst//
Even when you mad and you start to burst...violence isnt always the way out even when it hurts that bad, you want to shout//
Pick your nine and blast your anger out, so you feel good for bout 5 sec's in your life you killed a man prolly had a wife//
A family ripped apart cuz you could keep your control, thanks to you, 'to heaven goes another soul'..4 real jus pulled the trigg in stone-cold//
Think before you act, dont step into thing's you dont even want to ....cuz you dont need to prove shit to another who thinks that you should//
Cuz peepz like that..are bad they know nuttin bout brotherly love in the hood, they think they know whats good they jus stupid. whatever they do cant be good//
So when you up to somthin, to make a man who thinks hes better than you and u wanna let him show that u are the 1 how is it 'worth'..better think twice b4 you do it cuz we all jus cried at birth//

not a bad drop...........kinda long but its was still pretty good......str8 drop homie

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dis was hott i think ima start open mic haha good job tho

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uppin 4 feedback!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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yo this shit was tight. flow was off the hook. lyrics are dope. big props to you guys. this was a great collab

Thnx for the props man ....uppin for some more comment

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i felt this shit...it was real deep...props to both writers this was a nice collab...lookin out for future stuff you do...oNe

that was a tight ass drop, i liked the flow the vocab an the topic it was all crazy nice drop you guys it was nuts 9/10...pz

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

One word TIGHT.

it coulda been mad shorter and still got tha same point across...
see, especially with just reading rhymes the length can determine if you get a feel for whuts being described or if it just becomes monotonous from so many lines of the same thing...

keep writing...

peace...

Uppin for some more feed-back

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More comments ............cmon peepz dont sleep.

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this shit was sick....props to both of you for a good drop. flow was good, wordplay, vocabulary, everything was good, one of the best pieces iv'e seen in a while.

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