nice choice of beat.....one of my favorites.....but lets get down to this....


ur delivery was off, and i noticed like at times u get stuck with your words, so u mumble them when u spit faster....the hook was ok....i like the way you doubled ur voice...but put more emotion into it...the beat was a little too loud..just a little tho....on ur second verse, try not to be too choppy with your bars...is like u waited too long to get back into your rhyme...i know what u was tryin to do, but make sure it goes crispy with the flow of the beat.....this was ok, not really my style to like, but keep doing your thing dawg...OnE



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