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Old 08-03-03, 04:06 AM   #1
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Old 08-03-03, 09:15 AM   #2
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Yeah Got This Beat...Its Dopenuss! ....Your Flow And Delivery Is Improving For Sure...Shits Nice Man...You're Quality Does Pretty Much Let It Down..That Can All Be Improved On Later On...This Is A Good Track Man...Lyrics Are Good...Had Some Meaning, Which I Like...Enjoyed It Mun...Stay Uppin...Pz...
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Old 08-03-03, 11:33 AM   #3
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dope dope dope beat, i was gonna use this, but didnt for some reason

your flow is flawless on this track, something unique and i felt it ... nice

lyrics are nice ... nothing spectacular, but you didnt fall off at all and you kept up to par at all times

ive always felt your voice ... you have a certain accent to it and i really gettin into it ...

the hook on this was simple, but dope - which is the way it should be, nice shit

quality kinda sucks, but you cant really change that besides spendin cash, so i cant knock that

hook got my head noddin', nice shit ...

enjoyed listenin' ... werd .. pz..1
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Old 08-03-03, 10:47 PM   #4
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wasn't feelin the beat as much as the others did.......but lyrics were ok....delivery was pretty good, and flow did just ok....kinda choppy but u as an emcee can fix that within more experience of makin records.....overall this was ok.....keep doing your thing tho....OnE




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