A freestyle i made. one of my first self produced tracks. but anyway it is a real freestyle. i dont consider it all that good but eh check it.

it's a'ight... for a freestyle the lyrical content is good... flowed alright.. voice is drown' out by the beat.. but whatever... check my shit out.. peace

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this wasn't all dat good....just ok.....ur delivery was off.....your flow was good at sum points of the song, but then it just fell off in other sections....and like blunt said, the beat is type loud....practice and delivery, cuz once u got that mastered, it's easy to keep a flow with the beat and with your lyrics....stay up....OnE




I'm Ghost...

YEa this is really old. this was like my third track that ive made on my own without studio. anyways i dont agree with the fall off part. i listened to it many times im not exactly sure which parts u are talking about. But yea ill put up some recent stuff for u to check out. thanx for the feed back.

i run tracks like jesse owens..thats from big l, jayz freestyle right?
probably the only tyte line by jigga in that

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lol i "thought" i made it up. but i guess yo never know these days eh.