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08-07-03, 05:59 AM | #1 | ||||||
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~Worlds Construction~ Ill piece dont sleep
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Ive posted this on other sites under different names, so if you have seen it before dont freak out and accuse me of biting, im just using a different name now
_______ Heres some links to a couple threads I replied too: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5637#post685637 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5639#post685639 _______ Suspended in Space Witnessing the Construction-of-Earth, Watching The Descrution-of-Birth, Chaotic Events Define Earths Existence, Volcanos Explode In The Distance, Tidal Waves Raise With consistence, Tectonic Plates Clash, Earth Quakes Insue-Fast, Rocks Crumble To Dirt Then It Grows New-Grass, Foliage Forms, Then An Atmospheres Born, Single Cell Organisms Thrive, Connive To Stay Alive In Ocean Trenches, Life Clenches Onto A Thread-Of-Hope, Existence Seems Doomed To Fail But Instead-It-Grows, Adapts-n-Evolves, Keeps Growing, Never Relaxes-Or-Falls, Adaptation-Takes-Course And Forces Growth In Reaction-To-Resources, Aquatic Life Forms Grow Limbs N Crawl-Onto-Land, Crawl-Through-The-Sand, Grow Into What Life-Demands, On A Grand Scale Life-Expands, Now Dinosaurs Rule And Fight-For-Land, Reptilians Battle-Over-Superiority, Battle-Over-Authority, Enormous Serpents Rattle-The-Minority, Until A Meteor Strikes-The-Planet, Decimates Everything But Shit Rejuvenates Cause Life-Demands-It, Evolution Travels N Takes-A-Different-Direction, Unravels Smarter Primates And Makes-Corrections, Warm Blooded Mammals Take Rule-On-Land, But The Gene Pool-Demands More, Like Tools-And-Hands-With-Thumbs, Life Disbands-The-Dumb In Inserts New Intelligence, Gives Existing A Whole New Relevance, Now Humans With Reasoning And Wil Power Devour The Earths Resources, Until The Earths Natural Abilities To Sustain Life Recourses, The Human Race Scorches N Torches What Little-Is-Left, Creates There Own Riddle-Of Death, N Surly Wont Stop Till Mother Earth Takes Her Last Breath |
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08-07-03, 06:56 AM | #2 | ||||||
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the shit has that book of revelations feel to it man. it made me wanna go back to church and repent my sins LOL!!!! naw but seriously it was nice kinda wished it was a little longer but other than that it was nice. hey can you check out my open mic if you get a chance
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08-07-03, 07:45 AM | #3 | ||||||
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thanks for the feedback man
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08-07-03, 08:54 AM | #4 | |||||||
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I really agree with Him this was a good piece....You Are gonna be good one day..holla http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=71509 |
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08-07-03, 12:59 PM | #5 | |||||||
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^^same ways homie |
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08-08-03, 12:46 AM | #6 | ||||||
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thanks yall, upp fo mo feedback
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08-08-03, 04:14 AM | #7 | ||||||
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uppity up to the toppity top
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08-08-03, 04:35 AM | #8 | ||||||
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wow..nice drop kyd
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08-09-03, 12:33 AM | #9 | ||||||
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word two the mothers and fathers, lets get this up to the mother fucking top for more people to see it now ya hear.......................
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08-10-03, 05:54 AM | #10 | ||||||
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Uppppppping for mooooooore feeeeeeeeeeeeeedbaccccccck
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