check in 10-20 lines
no d/r
no sway
no b/s
the usual rules

aight see it there bruv.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..................

ok ill spit 1st unless u allready typin somethen but i will jus post mine anyways biatch, good luck 1

look this kat been goin to every open mic askin everybody to battle
destroy this kids mind, im the one he got and im ridin his verse with no saddle
ill leave ya paranoid and melodramatic havin lyrical periods, leavin u in a bloddy dept
doesnt sound posible but ur a pussy in real life and a pussy over the internet
leave you with anguish from the inside cuz none of ur bars comin out how they should
cuz they chopin in the middle of the line, jenxin urself, shoulda been knockin on wood
ill drop somethen more serious then the 7 plagues there aint no survival
shoulda been suicidal, because after my arival, things got complex like the bible
im gana cut u up with verbal razers, leave ya with verbal razer burn on ur bikini line
even the blind is feeling this, telescopes and glases and u still cant see this, im to fine
dunno if its cuz u hate or because u cant carry my weight
but u whack either ways and ur disses dont even penetrate
skin deep so how do u expect to disturb this disturbed kat
try usin some of my lines, but when u say em they come out whack
leave ya and u since my verbal presence
moanin in pain, kinda like herbal esenence
cuz u cant mess with this
bitch
i
could
talk
like
this
all
day
cuz im tryin make my lines straight so i dont feel like im messin with a gay

thats 19 lines the 1 word a line i count as one line
good luck, u say that its more then write somethen more if ya want cuz we might see things different

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uppin for votes when this kat spits............................................. ....................

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looks like hes off now............................................... ........................................

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ok seriously imma have to spit 2morrow, i need sleep )))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) )))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

lol thats fine man, jus spit by friday
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aight

cut this guys ~head?off~, drop him off ~fort?nox~, thats a penny for his ?thoughts?//
steady on your course, "dissable ya light switchs", your "off" target//
like ?hoes on stilts?, grotes your ?long gone bitch?//
i spit like ?storms? whilst you spit like a ?sausage?//
replicating ?reborns?, your ?life on lines? is going ?round in circles?//
unlike {avartar}bob{avartar}, your ~rhymes~ are as ~high~ as hurdles//
your an elite verbal girbil, biting whackness in ya practice till you turn the color purple//
trying to ride surf in my snake veins, ill bite ya verse so you can taste great shame//
past ?wars?, your en?gulf?ed in flames like me being the heatwave, and you being ~forest~spain~//
at least you got an ~honest~name~, :distorted: in ya :description:// (www.dictionary.com ,type his name)
:forces: down my :system:, theres high :torque: in my :wisdom://
your body submerged in my spits like atlantis//
and in this passage, im the iceberg to your titanic//

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week battle on both parties
but im a go with uneek for creativty and better wordplay

Wasnt feelin the first cat at all


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=72549

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uneek won.. but tha color is a lil mis-leading.. i cant votes sorry
but if you can hit my shit up i'd be thankful or suttin like that

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5384#post705384

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