Yo man, Spit at the same time bitch, get this up by 2nite, 10 lines MAX.................................

1 line=1bar..
i put this on game, that when you drop your verse, i'll drop within 10 minutes..
that gives me time to key it up..
aight..

iv'e already keyed against someOne and they seem like they aint showin..
so this is credibility for me..

I am gravity, yeah thats my "name", u seem to fink this is a "game", well wake up bitch cos im puttin ya to "shame", but you cant handle it cos your so "lame"//
Man your a pussy, You hav got a shit "fragrant" and your also "vagrant"//
Your lyrics are so "vague", sometimes i wondered if ya hav got lyrical "plague"//
I havent even started yet, and i hav already made you mental "scarred", i even bought you a birthday card cos i felt sorry cos your a fuckin "retard"//
My lyrics hav made you scared, Fuck it, they hav made you "paranoid", heres a few more lyrics you can try to "avoid"//
You should write some proper shit, Your rap is to "formal", i hav done my research, your girlfriend is "para-normal"//
Man im as synical as satan, my lyrics were "forbidden", after i beat you your hav to be bed "ridden"//
U fink your hard cos your committin crimes, like a "criminal", but your nothing but an "animal"//
King one, wat the fuck is that for a name? You should be called a "queen", im so brutal im gonna break your "spline"//
Now im gonna end this "shit" i hav torn you "bit" by "bit", so i will see you later you fuckin "tit"!//

nice shit gravity uv upped ur game since you're last battle il vote wen he spits check these out votes:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5819#post705819


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1

you got me Laughin See of how bad of a tragedy wit this kid named Gravity..
Whats a 'meta- for' when battelin a weak Lyrisist are you hearing this..
gayer then Elton-Is, so tell me why you Suckin on Dicks
Even if 'Poop' were to 'Cost', you still aint 'worth a Shit'!!
Im surprised your mom didnt have an Abortion Son
cuz when she Fucked that Bum, she was screamin "it was just for fun!!"..
so now every-month, your mom feeds you hoping you'll die soon like Big-Pun..
You heard me Come so start to Run, Im using 1 sylable words for you cuz i Think your Dumb..
got shot then Spun, retard got chewed worse then Gum
Im pretty much done nice merking you son, peace-out..ONE..

King one got this fa sho. Gravity your verse rhymed but you had no wordplay. King attempted wordplay so i gotta give it too him. none of yall can vote but check out my battle and drop feed back

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...6285#post706285

thanks for tha vote kid..
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vote = king

gravity, get a dictionary cuz your vocab is basic as hell no beef, just elevate

hit this up:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73429

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if your peepin this, droppa a qiuk vote...
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king one holla at me and give me and vote on my battle aginst b-dazzle............................................ ........

[QUOTE]Originally posted by lilbrick005
[B]King one got this fa sho. Gravity your verse rhymed but you had no wordplay. King attempted wordplay so i gotta give it too him. none of yall can vote but check out my battle and drop feed back

Word props to both of you keep elevatin though.
Peace

lets be honest gravity only rhymed and said much of nothing -- you looked like the rhyming was controlling you instead of controlling it -- it was weak -- king one dissed you with more relative skill so based on the merit of the two verses put forward k is getting my vote