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Old 08-15-03, 05:17 PM   #1
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keepin up wit tha times

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Yo

say things, things you dont mean, that your not feelin
stop breathin, get your ass recognition, i need no more ammunition, im passed out and on the floor, while theese hos stand screamin for more. getin myself water to drink, spit it out in to the sink, watch the liquid flow down with the sound that weve all heard, its not absurd, its just the way it is. Lend me some money and ill get back to business, send me off in the dark, ill defend this country again, whats the threat this time, we under attack from a giant hen, gonna lay some eggs all over this landfill site city, never looked so pretty,under the rule of a half drunk comitee.

The times dont change, we cant categorize the circumstances that create genius, cant change the peoples meanness. But genuis just craetes and goes past all logic, it breaks the barriers down that we though would never promise, forget the will to win and forget your daily sins, cleanse ur mind, and find the things that get thrown out in dustbins, witness the things you said you didnt mean, strawberries and cream, ill set off into the wind.
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Old 08-15-03, 08:47 PM   #2
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uhhh..hmm..this was kinda wack..it had no real purpose..didnt really seem to have a set topic..the main focus jumped around a lot..make n the point of this unclear..flow was ok..real simple..no multis..structure needs some work..a lot of ppl dont like read n things in paragraph form..better than ur last drop..but still got a lot of elevate n to do..
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