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Old 08-15-03, 07:38 PM   #1
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Bullet Holes (Remix)

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Hook:
bullets enter-renter-center-ur heart venter/
mention-it/tension shit-exspensive spit/
yo cliq-can lick my dick/
x3

these multis sick-i got da cunt u got da prick/
i get da pussy-u get da dick/
i get tits and ass-u get the throat and glass/
i ain't playin no more-i ain't sayin and sprayin this/
to make niggas wnna make be layin and triss/
i stick my knife ur wind pipe/swipe-yo chain/
type yo pain/you've gone insane in da brain/
to try and touch my cell membrane/
i train-to kill/i spit to thrill/i win to be ill/
niggas kno be the name LiL LoCo/
im crazy-ill put yo whole block in a chokehold/
im vocal-and terrible/im so called "air able"/
this dun even make sense and ur in shock/
uh oh i coped out da glock-dun mock-my hip hop/
"slip slop-tip top-drip dop"/ lalalal POP/
its ova/

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Old 08-15-03, 07:50 PM   #2
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Lmao..............U only had one verse..........And this piece was weak , I wasnt feeling the content , And ur lyrics were simple.......Next time if u knew that this was a whole song , make it 2 verses.....
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Old 08-16-03, 01:39 AM   #3
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bullets enter-renter-center-ur heart venter-what is a heart "venter" i think you mean ventricle but that dosen't rhyme huh? I think that this wasn't bad you were just trying to hard ease off and let it flow naturally instead of trying to force it, the words'll come on their own. 1
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