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Old 08-18-03, 02:41 AM   #1
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Deep Shit.. PEEP N REPLY

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aint looking like we're going to survive my longer
the world is a ghetto and times are get stronger
which leads us to believe,our minds are getting weaker
we follow a flase prophet,who can indentify the leader
not I said the speaker,but let the story go on
from the beginning we were destine to ruin our lives
we've come so far,still I ask if GOD is hearing our cries
I know he is there beyond whatever we choose to believe
if we suffer,just know that GOD has sumthing up his sleeve
too hard for us to understand,so we lose faith and give hate
rather we should invest to generate and make ourselves elevate
but its hard for the world to get together,without conflict
one thing leads to another,and then the bullet spit
do they quit,naw man,not until we open our eyes
see the truth behind the diabolical lies
lemme catch my breath,its hard to comprehend
with all the troubles in the world,its not hard to think of the end
what else can we think of,no more conclusion
so we hate on the GOD,lose trust in the GOD
end up living us lives without a holy cause
Im dependent on what it is,not what is was
time to be radical,enough of the conservative
cause ppl are dying to fast,so whats the purpose to live
how one individual change the worlds view
well gimmie sum time,one place,and I'll show you the way
trust in GOD before the cometh of judgement day
or get left with triple six on your face,having you finding GOD like Ma$e
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Old 08-18-03, 09:05 PM   #2
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uppin for sum replys
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Old 08-18-03, 10:06 PM   #3
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this was ight..content was ok..noth n that hasnt been done before..u really need to work on ya spell n..the 1st half of ur verse was just horrible..spell n wise..need a lil work on ya grammar too..other than that..not bad..
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