12 lines max
u spitten first
10 hour deadline from check in
usual voting rules
try to spit soon

iight check in then drop wheneva ..............

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checking in... im try and drop tonight... i need sleep
100 characters - read the wheel of time series
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lol ok drop wheneva dawg ...... u have 10 hours .........good luck ..............blah blah blah 100 charachters .................................................. .................................................. ...........

Your ghost writer 'pitches' rhymes in unique places
I will still 'take you out' on a regular basis (bases)
This isn’t 'chess' but this 'rook' will win
I’ll 'pawn' your win, go get a ghost write from BROOKLYN
Finding your flow makes me impatient
Heres 50 cent, go pay for changes
Grab a rail, Ima put my nikes in your tail
Call your ghost writer "the check is in the mail"
*breaths in*
Certain verbs will work perfect
For me to word this herb merkin'

note: no offense to Brooklyn

~like malicious*canabalism*put u through the rb cycle like ur a*metabalism*//
~my rhymes put u in pain and leave u wit back*spasms*//
~wit a body full of gatorade u still wouldn't * have it in you*//
~u drinkin that hatorade don't think i can't see*straight through you*//
~cuz u know my rhymes are like chronic straight natural urs are *genetic*made*//
~sittin at home wit some lyrics workin in *pathetic ways*//
~my flow and lyrical wordplay put u in a*maze* get yah body in a*daze*//
~straight vicious have u trippin like u jus hit the *purple haze*//
~yah know i shoulda warned yah .. cuz i'ma win this shit under any*condition*//
~cuz for me this is jus a *continued traditon* //

all votes as follows please

flow
wordplay
multis
punches
overall

thank you
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iight insanewhiteboy def, took this but since he is tryin out for my crew i'm not gonna poll ... cuz i don't wanna hear any shit from am at cha or the mods but here is the breakdown

flow: insanewhiteboy
wordplay:insanewhiteboy
multis:neither really
punches:tie
overall:insanewhiteboy

vote:insanewhiteboy

flow-tie
wordplay-insane
multis-none
punches-insane
vocab-insane
overall-insane

SRY DAWG BUT INSANE WUZ JUSS BETTER OVERALL U STILL NEED TO ELEVATE ALOT INSANE CAME ALOT HARDER NICE TRY THOUGH DAWG

VOTE=INSANE

i dont know if this is vote swaying, if it is i will take the DQ (report me)

maybe it doesnt matter much on how battles are done on this site but i think i had somewhat of a theme for my verse

report me if this is wrong
im going to go change my sig

insane got this, he came harder wit his punches and was morecomplex vote=insane
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I cant vote but i'd vote for Insane if i could..

Basically what Anti-Hero said...

You need to try harder ..

Word
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=74151

flow: insanewhiteboy
wordplay:insanewhiteboy
multis:none
punches:tie
overall:insanewhiteboy

vote=insane

weak battle though.