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08-21-03, 01:51 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Right Where You Stand (Free Verse)..MIXTAPE STYLE!..
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Right Where You Stand (Free Verse)
Lo Fi Hi Fi I'll Leave You Right Where You Stand...It's Tha Lord Stand Tha Fuck Up... |
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08-21-03, 03:13 PM | #2 | |||||||
ThA BaDmAn Is HeRe NoW
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hmm... for reppin newark this is a disapointment
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08-21-03, 04:13 PM | #3 | ||||||
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?????yeah duke let me peep ur shit...OMFG u say this a disappointment u kno wuts a disappointment ur piece of shit audio u did wit that cat slugz...kid u wack as fuck ur mic sounds like its made by fisher price n i bet u rec0rd ur tracks on sound rec0rder...s0 hope off mah nuts...done deal...where the real criticism at...
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08-21-03, 05:00 PM | #4 | |||||||
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yo i like this shit. you write that beat? shit was tight. should write n make this a longer track yo...pz
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08-22-03, 01:31 PM | #5 | ||||||
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thanks y0...appreciate real feedback....
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08-22-03, 07:44 PM | #6 | |||||||
...Fuck With That!
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im disappointed too. and shotta is nicer than u are. i heard your animal rap track. that was weak. dont put shit on here and diss people critiquin ya shit. you will get sonned.
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08-23-03, 01:08 AM | #7 | |||||||
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NEGATIVE...shotta aint better than he his....as a matter a fact, they both up to the same level.....and i hate that gangstarr beat.....song was ok, nuttin interesting, vocal presence was decent, flow was kinda choppy tho, you could work on that.......but verbatize was right bout choppa....that song he did with SLUGZ WAS HORRIBLE...HAHA.....anywayz stay up verb and do you.....OnE I'm Ghost... |
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08-23-03, 01:59 AM | #8 | ||||||
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this is koo... i feel it.. i admir ya strenght in trying to articulate.. some words sounded corny cause ya put too much into articulating the one word.. but its koo..
quality is crackly and not mixed well.. but ehh.. one.. holla son |
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08-23-03, 01:59 AM | #9 | ||||||
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forgot to say.. flow is straight.. not hundred percent perfect but good.. its koo shit.. touch ups...
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08-23-03, 10:51 PM | #10 | ||||||
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i killed this beat 1039403 times better in the tourney
.pz. (you said BOO HOO...and ..lol...ill stop)
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08-24-03, 02:33 AM | #11 | |||||||||
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Did someone ask if you "wrote this beat" ???
wtf?
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08-24-03, 07:31 AM | #12 | ||||||
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I'm feeling that beat, mos' definite! This wasn't that bad at all, your lyrics were decent, but what really did stand out is your delivery and emotion within this, because you stayed onpoint throughout the majority of this track.. Nice flow, overall though.. Sometimes your flow became a talking type of "rap," although your redeemed yourself plenty of times and took yourself away from slowing down..
By the way, what beat is that, family? |
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08-24-03, 07:59 AM | #13 | ||||||||
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lol i was just stirin up shit
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08-24-03, 11:35 AM | #14 | |||||||||
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the beat is Gangstarr - Right where you stand
how do you not know this?
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