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Old 08-22-03, 03:05 AM   #1
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Hook:
One day yall see/
me not on M.T.V-Not On B.E.T/
But On The T.V/specifically- Americas Most Wanted-yall/
this rhyme ain't put out to be flaunted/
but so yall kno who i feel/

I do crimes-like i sell nicks and dimes/
20 a day-30 lay-14 spray-15 decay/
life expansion 19 yrs old/in the blisterin cold/
killin niggas-tryin to act bold/
put in a cell-its worse den hell/
3 years-thousands of tears/many fears/
man can't survive-what he dun kno/
only way-to/ is to be live and flow/
show these niggas who u b/
spit fast as doubles-get rida ya troubles/
spit it slow-just flow wit meh/
grow wit me-in my expansion of the vocab/
hit u wit so many words like a knife in ya ab/
i stab it-shanked ya/ended ya-defriended ya/
thought i befriended ya?-nuh uh/
stick to da script-b4 the gun clip accidently "slipped"/
and yo blood dripped-yo mind flipped/yo body dipped-in along lastin bind/
uve been confinded-like in a cell-but its hell-in yo brain/
im drivin u insane-WHAT NO?

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WHAT YES-is what i say-when niggas spray/
wnna do a job for me/when niggas say/
wnna make some rivals lay/
i jump to it-i slump the fluid-dump the new shit/
unlock da glock-tick tock der goes da clock/
time for us to spray yo block/
i just rocked ya-"Tupac'ed ya"/havin u feelin insane/
uve been slain-u body drained-from all the pain/
niggas u can't fuck wit a P.I.M.P-specially when he gotta T.E.K/
and is aimin towrads yo "N.E.C.K" time for u to lay/
time for me to spray and slay dis nigga/
no need for any type of speciall vocab/
in a battle u dun seem um popin out da dictionary do ya?/
im threw wit ya/
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Old 08-22-03, 05:28 AM   #2
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I do crimes-like i sell nicks and dimes/
20 a day-30 lay-14 spray-15 decay/
life expansion 19 yrs old/in the blisterin cold/
killin niggas-tryin to act bold/--I liked this it wasn't bad at all, somewhere in the middle of your verse i got a little lost but blame it on the weed!! lol. Overall I'd say that this may not be the most original concept or best executed as far as vocab it was good. kinda like that g-shit you listen to when you're faded and you just wanna chill. 7.5/10
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Old 08-30-03, 07:55 PM   #3
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This was tight..it had a good flow to it...it really tells about you....stay up..
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