i think i got it right this time

My Verse...
Step up to the plate, cuz ya next to get "stuck"...
Like a leafless clover, yous outta luck...
Spit-on-the-mic, cuz i flow like a gun-rave...
Shit-on-your-like, cuz im the only one brave...
Flow-stone-warrior, bearin a guilded mic...
Blow-bone-lawyer, fags keepin secrets sheilded...
Purified ya raps, make them into less then fake-acid...
Punches so weak, you couldnt cause a ripple in Lake-Placid...
lookin like a cripple as you 'c' walkin and shit talkin...
Slamed in the face, you see me tripple, and now your treetalkin and teenstalkin...

Lil G's Verse
This fags a loner which burns his life faster/
Hence his name..he gets invisible friends..a Shadow-Caster/
You can barely stomach my rhymes like quivering-crunches/
Working as a waiter is your only experience at delivering-punches/
Pretendin to be a baseball player is the only time you spit-just-like-a-star/
shadow just checks my past verses if he needs help to get-another-bar/
Yur like the teeth of osteoporosis patients cuz you’re easily knocked-out/
kid..if good lyrics were the key to the door…you’d be locked-out/
After this battle u b like Machiavelli tryin to fake ya death/
U wanna break my neck while you couldnt even brake a sweat/

lets vote

aite coo shit ,,,lil g shud merk u tho
anyoen can u hit my battles up its rite there man foreal i need more votersssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
an ill be aback to vot in here pc

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this i gettin slept on!!!!!i you vote inthis batle, drop a link and i will hit it up
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ya lil g had the harder punches and better flow...good spit////////////////////vote on my battles honestly........

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...............yeah Lil G took this one, had harder punches and i thought Lil G had the better flow of the two..............

im up 2-0...damn this kid said on aim he was a vet

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thia s gettin slept on like crazy... uppin for votes
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Lil G Took This Quite Easily.. Punches Were Harder
And more Direct

Vote - Lil G
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You can barely stomach my rhymes like quivering-crunches/
Working as a waiter is your only experience at delivering-punches/
Pretendin to be a baseball player is the only time you spit-just-like-a-star/
shadow just checks my past verses if he needs help to get-another-bar/

i liked these lines from lil g, he gets my vote beta wordplay the rest was pretty even......go check my battles with split eyes and hypnotic.............

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im up 4-0...i need one more vote and i win. so vote you dumbass's!!!!
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