wrote to say good bye to hollywood beat...................

a lil distance i guess not enuff to be ill-will persitince,
i'd wish u here this instince no need to be dat distant,
i saw her once and since den, things been,
nicer forra change, quite a re-arrange in only a couple'a days, she's charmin, but in more than a couple'a wayz,
I'm suttle with praise u may not hear me mutter'a phrase cuz i'd prally stutter on your A's,
u could pass a test wit da best grades,
cop u ur own Guess shades it's like u stay on the bench cuz u won't get played, just cuz i miss my baby ya'll ppl think i'm crazy, but if u knew the feeling u'd consider ya self lazy-
sumtimes i can't see thru tha fog the air's too hazy,
but the radiance u bring just cleers it it's crazy and even in years u could still be my baby,
i admire no other lady,
not a liar&not at all shady, i just behave me lately,
kno that i appreciate u greatly.
8-)

heh heh..this was good..good flow,good multis..this would should good in audio...

Part 2

I'm done with the hurt take my system of nerves, rip it out, throw it all over tha curb, Cuz Life's werth what I stand on, ur face I would never lay a hand on see thas just my clever handlin,
is like i can't accept tha fact that ur gone, i block out anything anyone ever says about u if not i'd b rapped in ur song, Tightly grippin on u like ur thong but u can't chill w/ sum1 who hits da bong, wtf, shut up, u smoke dont lie, i choke then i'm high so if u can't talk to me why?, U gota understand it's been 4 years, and ur man's dun nuthin but build more fears, no will to deplore tears cuz if u shed'um ery1 thinks your queer, but shit ery thug cries don't be surprised i see thru ya lies the thing is it just hurts me inside, u rip my intestines out so u can make my stomik more wide, cuz i can't handle tha truth wen u runn-it i hide, life- i'll gun-it wit pride, it's sum dumb shit ta lie so im'a keep my integrity while i keep gettin high

yea, i can tell that shit's a key-style it shows but it was tite for a key-style, u got some good multi's in there but tha one thing i don't like is that it ain't organized, that's my one problem, that is all