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08-27-03, 10:19 AM | #1 | ||||||
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I do question the world sometimes...as to foward the qaultity...here is some keyed thoughts
What purposes do we as Humans serve to the earth that we live on? Always greed for power and consumin the resources now there gone/ We pawn our future n deteriating what we had that was blooming, This too the pain thats implicating this earth, we're far from tuning/ The peace that we could with-hold but we near close to decimating, Unity between one other but were we mould into game like animating/ I'm anticpating what the outcome will be once modernisation has evolved, Endeavour to suceed but run are chances to none of warmth to cold/ Mankind may just be a toy set to hiararchey for amusement and fun, Science that structures reality maybe inept and are lives may not of begun/ These may be only pre-lesson to come matured before we're accepted, Maybe we're rejected and dieing is concession for that we was corrected/ Never have we perfected but suffered pain on this earth left in suppression, I will keep _\~STRESSIN~/_ the imprtance to progress is questions/ ? I dun thinking now..lol |
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08-27-03, 12:19 PM | #2 | |||||||
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fo sho u got a nice vocabulary but i felt u were putting too much emphasis on it, instead of wat u were sayin, but it was good none tha less, easy to follow, tha flow was there, but don't try to stress vocab so much, i mean it's good to, but too much ain't good
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08-27-03, 01:14 PM | #3 | ||||||
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nice ass vocab dawg..........i see u live in ur lil own world.........though it wuz discriptive...........overall it wuz preety tight.......BLAH!!!!......^^^^ its NAWMEAN?......1ne
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08-27-03, 03:05 PM | #4 | ||||||
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thanx^^^
Appreciate the feedback o N e |
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08-27-03, 03:54 PM | #5 | ||||||
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no doubt hommie..........................i give props where its due......
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08-27-03, 06:24 PM | #6 | ||||||
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Wurd^^^
hOlla o N e |
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08-27-03, 07:18 PM | #7 | ||||||
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Wow, Nice Work Here....
I feel that the bars might have been stretched, but it might just be yo style...sooo nothing wrong wit dat. Vocab was real good in this peice... Flow, Nice...Simple...Work on different things like multi's...you had some.... Overall nice peice 9/10 |
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08-27-03, 07:51 PM | #8 | ||||
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Nice spit dawg.......damn.......fo real....some good shit....i liked it....hope i can see more of them drops like that Lmao @ ur Sig..
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08-28-03, 11:55 AM | #9 | ||||||
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Yup...Thanx
fo real that sig is authentic...lol hOlla |
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08-28-03, 11:56 AM | #10 | ||||||
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SEE THIS IS WHAT I WAS TELLIN YOU YOU CAN ONLY ELIVATE THIS WAS ILL POP KEEP DOING YOU
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