U SPIT, 10 LINES, 10 minutes

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I 'dish out punches' that leaves him 'fucked over' like 'smut-dealin'/cut-squealin, i put your 'intestines in ya hands'..you losin is a 'gut-feelin//
come as hard as you want but i stay on top cuz heres no way to attack-me, i pack-heat/ audi stays 'runnin this kat like Distance runners 'at track-meets//
dont test me dog, my 'bars is hard' like a 'chrome erection'/
i tone-perfection, its proven ya whack at battles...YOU SHOULD STICK TO THE POEMS-SECTION//
i'm quick with my message, i deliver letters wit ya shame-enclosed, flames-composed/i 'dug up enough personals' on you that it left a 'grave-exposed//
Audi makes him leave the sight like a ghost, you fear-me, BOO/
hear-the-truth, you say you like to 'think out loud of ya illness'...but 'no ones hearing-you//

Here i go now.

Yo, listen up what I'm about to say is true kids
There are some things that you hear these days that might sound stupid
A dude says he's gonna kill someone and goes and buys a gun
And after you hear this you start thinking, "Why, is it fun?"
No of course out you gotta get it through your head
That it's all just made up, and yes I knew he said
That he's been with 10 women who got HIV
Well I can understand why you all would hate why he
Would say that, I think you know who I'm talkin about
Yep, Audible, and I don't blame him for lockin out
Of his life all the folks who treat him like a nothing
Well to all those people let me tell you this one thing
I ain't sayin' this cuz I'm a fan or cuz I can
It's cuz all this controversy and judgment wasn't planned
Very well, you just need to get to know him better
And maybe next time you won't have personal vendettas
I used to be just like you, at that time I wouldn't write you
This rap, I'd be like, "Okay, Slim, strike two!
One more strike and you're out!" But there'd be raps and he'd put more out
And I'd hear stuff about taking drugs and punching whores out
But it's all just fake, can't y'all just take
A joke, instead of thinkin', "Marshall Mather's low is sinkin"?
He ain't a bad guy, so if you can't try
To look beyond the words, just say "Later man, BYE!"

uppin for this kat^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^............................. .................................................. .............

This one was meant for someone else but who cares. You can tell it was for someone else can't you.--------------------------UPPIN FOR VOTES

Damn you said 10 lines...........that was a ma'fuckin book you doubled the limit......and im still gonna murk you

no way dude.--------------------------------------so what if i did 20 lines or so.---------------------------------------------------------

isnt that a eminem song?............. yo on tha real .............how can you spit that much and not say anything?......................................... ..n e way ill keep my comments to myself cuz audiible is in my crew and shit but Nice spit bro keep rackin up those wins

aight. Sick sylables, you sound like you
havn't battled much. Your stuck in the Poet Mind.
you didnt really have any punches, and thats what a battle is.

audible had a Good verse. i liked the flow and punches.


dont test me dog, my 'bars is hard' like a 'chrome erection'/
i tone-perfection, its proven ya whack at battles...YOU SHOULD STICK TO THE POEMS-SECTION//


^^^that was sick...VOTE=AUDIBLE.
I cant poll vote yet, but i aint a NEWB..


FUCK SLEEPERZ
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...9862#post739862

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=76279

THANX UPPIN>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

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If i had a hundred posts i would vote,

but audible took this shit with better flow, punches, multiz, wordplay, disses....he toook every category.....peace