spit at same time
verses due in 30mins after check in
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no hate
no biting
no feeding
10lines max
no extending lines
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no quoted votes

this is mah check in... where u at???............................................. ..................

sos dude checkin in.......................10 lines yo 4real............................................. ............

aight.. due in 30 from now!!............................................. .............................

aight check

By lookin' at ya record I can tell that the rap game wasn't made for fags lyke you//1
Yousa pussy whose rhymes are so wack that it's easy for me to slice through//2

I seen you get destroyed in rap battles by little white kids in *Special Education*//3
Trust me, just quit... I'm sure you are alot better, than rappin', at masturbation//4

Beating me? Naw playa, that shit is crazy lyke Monica suckin' on Bill's cock//5 (Monica Lewinsky & Bill Clinton)
At the end of this battle you'll be left speechless like 8 Mile's Papa Doc//6

XL4REAL? By your name it seem lyke yousa fat muthafucka lyke Ruben Studdard//7 (XL = Xtra Large)
This cat couldn't flow if he was givin' lessons by Eminem... in the end he will be left shuddered//8

You don't wanna tell people where ya work cuz you prolly make minimum wage//9
Dawg you twenty-six! You shouldn't be battlin' kids on fuckin' a webpage//10

uppin for xl4real........ times almost up................................................ ..............

Check it......................

The only way to COPY me is if you were my CLONE,
but you can WHISTLE mutha fucker you about to get BLOWN.

The only time you get good SPITS is when I lend you my SALIVA,
and you think your INSPECTOR GADGET but really your OLD like MAGYVER.

Are you a dangerous MAN? na just a DANGEROUS MOUSE,
You Living for your POSTS, you got a PILLAR BOX for your HOUSE. (danger mouse lived in a pillar box)

If you painted me with BLOOD RED COLOURING is the only way id DYE, (DYE-DIE)
and if you were the HIGHEST SCORING RUBGY PLAYER you couldnt get me if ya TRIED. (a tri is a score in rugby)

You couldnt SLICE and DICE me like LIGHTENING if you were COOKING up a STORM,
Im scared truly I am when ya WORD is BORN, cuz they say theres no greater WRATH than a WOMANS SCORN.....

10 lines what up.......

uppin dis yo no d/r or hate ok constructive critism only.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .....................

Ok....Tis Was RB 101 Lemme Break It Down

Punches-XL4REAL
Flow-TIED
Wordplay-XL4REAL
Overall-XL4REAL

This Was A Ok Battle But Xl Took It Other Guy Needs To Elevate...

O Yea Hit Dis Up Honestly Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77024

this shit was close as fuck..
wordplay = tied
structure = enigma
punches= tied
flow = tied leanin a lil to enigma

enigma got this in my opinion but by a tiny bit.. good battle.. close ass battle IMO

vote= enigma...by a lil bit

^ Ya Neither of You had metaphors and the punches were kinda weak ... Both You guys need to elevate..

Vote - XL4REAL

Return tha favor with an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77231

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yo uppin for this honest votes returned but NO D/R
uppin............................................. .................................................. .